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Prison
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Looking through these bars
Knowing theres no way out
Longing to be with him
Thats what its all about
I can't be free of this prison
It has a strangling hold
Trapped in a world of pain
With someone whos grown cold

Wanting to be with him
He's longing to be with me
But locked in our own prison
Where niether can be free
Keeping our love hidden
Deep in our heart
While these invisible prison bars
Are keeping us apart

Living in cold indifference
Knowing he is too
Dreaming of each other
But not much we can do
So many miles come between us
While we suffer silently
As the freezing bars of our prison
Keeps him from me

© Linda Hill 2003




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 Reviews of "Prison"
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on June 30, 2003
Wow. This really hits hard.. Well done.. Expressed perfectly.. michael

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 30, 2003
Linda....clap clap clap....great write my friend....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
A lonely feeling, all right. Good poem, Linda.
Leland

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
This moves me deeply, I relate to it closely. Excellent, Linda
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
real emotions I sense in your poem here, I enjoyed this

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
So heartfelt and true. Fine poem. Bill Murray

Reviewed on June 29, 2003
raw and emotive write, linda; you do these so well! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
may be time for a prison break... powerful emotions...

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
Wow Linda.
A difficult poem indeed, but captures so well what too many of us experience.
May liberation come in time.
Love will set you free.
Awesome poetry.
John

Reviewed on June 29, 2003
This invisible prison chokes us always. Good write Linda!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
Beautiful poem filed with raw emotion Linda!!
I think I know the feeling!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed on June 29, 2003
I've been there, and yes, there is an invisible prison...no different than a visible one, huh? Stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
Linda,
This one I can relate to for
I lived in that prison for many months almost
a year and then I gaveup. But in giving up
I found my freedom and the timing and carrier of his love was so much more rewarding than
what I almost settled for.
It is never ever not possible. But the time in prison is impossible I know and this one carries the lonliness of that captivaty to heart.
Excellent piece...
Peggy

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
Cut to the heart, beautiful poem of raw emotion. Nothing is ever completely impossible.


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