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Dancing With Neptune
by Annabel Sheila → (All Poetry by Annabel Sheila)
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As day surrenders to the night
Deep shadows cling to the bay
Where a solitary silhouette
Pauses along her way!
 
On Neptune’s breath the tide rolls in
Soon it will cover the land.
The sea will dance upon the shore
And the stones on which she stands.
 
Claiming that which belongs to him
Neptune forces her retreat.
But unwilling to abandon the solitude,
She two-steps out of reach!
 
From stone to stone she dances
As her laughter fills the night.
Neptune tries to out step her
But she’s like a bird in flight!
 
Dancing neath a star-filled sky
To the tune of Neptune’s hiss,
She leads him in a merry dance
As he tries to steal a kiss!
 
All too soon the dancing fizzles
Neptune’s takes his seat!
And the silhouette curtsies on the shore
As she silently retreats!
 

© Annabel Sheila


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 Reviews of "Dancing With Neptune"
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 4, 2011
Marvelous - Keep Dancin!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 3, 2011
a beautiful write Annabel
enjoyed reading your great thoughts and imagery
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 3, 2011
AN UNFORGETTABLE TIME OF PLAY AND DANCE...WITH A REGAL PARTNER, WHO WILL ALWAYS WIN. WELL DONE, ANNABEL; PHRASES, RHYME AND IMAGERY ARE SET IN A GREAT STYLE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on August 3, 2011
Anna, I can feel the energy in this magical dance! Lovely poem. Take care, Chessly

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 3, 2011
Anna, what a magical dance, images played in my head..great story!
Hugs,Christine

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on August 3, 2011
I love this one, Annabel. The musical style of a poem well told was a delight to me! A keeper.

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
Reviewed on August 3, 2011

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 3, 2011
Very nicely done Anna, almost musical in its story telling.\fee

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on August 3, 2011
Anna, I really like this one. It seems to have a perfect rhythm to it and just flows right off my tongue. I too read it repeatedly, a really fun read. Thanks Dick

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on August 3, 2011
Great poem, great writing, my friend. What I sense here is the sea attempting to overtake the shore but continually rolling back from where it came, as night attempts to overtake day.
Your friend, Mark

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2011
This is such a cleaver bit of writing, Anna. I had to read it twice I enjoyed it so much. Maybe in the next poem you might give us a hint at who this two-stepping dancer is. I have to save this wonderful poem.


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