Grenade in my heart, (edited my old poem.) (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 24, 2006

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2006

I'm so glad you posted this "oldie"...it grips the reader with such impact! Well done, Kay.

Reviewed on February 4, 2006

Strikes hard and strikes deep. Proof once again that great
work comes in small packages. Out of pain, sad to say.
Write ON! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Oh this is so real and painful, Kay. Grips the heart.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Kay -

Super write - so much said in this short and succinct work!

Robert

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Ouch!!!
wonderful burst of emotion
hard imagery!!!

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Excellent write.
Unbelievable what others can do to us. But hopefully they won't break us.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Dear Kay,

Powerfully packed poetry. Not a nice situation to find yourself in, it's sad when in life, such saddness is so prevalent.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Oh wow...this was outstanding, very powerful,

Reindeer

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 9, 2004

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2004

Powerful hit. Great write.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 9, 2004

Oooh! This is razor sharp and cuts like shards of shattered glass - fallout from the explosion you describe here, Kay! Very surgical and compact - and all the more powerful for your objective, detached expression. This anaesthetises and blows apart at the same time. Thank you for this "old war-wound". Worth "baring" again!! Good to meet you! Kate xx

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on August 9, 2004

Very profound poem with beautiful imageries. Thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 9, 2004

(((kay)))

WOW--painful, heartwrending, emotional minefield here--honest write wiith POWERFUL imagery! *applause* BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on August 9, 2004

No frills here. Just plain honest writing -- loved it.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on August 9, 2004

That's a unique way to put that.
It is sad, but you shall prevail.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 9, 2004

A most profound 'oldie,' Kay, and the War of Love can be the most devastating war of all.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 9, 2004

Kay..We must guard our heart with the utmost care and caution .

Love
Peter

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 9, 2004

Oh Kay:

I this so sad, and yet...as Tinka said..."Dynamite!"

Sandie Angel

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 9, 2004

Dynamite filled Pen you have Kay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 9, 2004

Powerful images. I hope recovery is well on its way.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 8, 2004

This is creative and powerful...
Lp

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 8, 2004

explosive metaphor!

Reviewed by Ann Piatt

Reviewed on August 8, 2004

Oh my gosh, Kay! I was not expecting this at all...the title offered me no clue as to what awaited me when i began reading...which was a good thing...because it completely blew me away when i read it. Short and to the point. Hard-hitting piece of writing, Kay!

Ann

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 8, 2004

Kay, you have caught the essence of what
the war of love does to us! Fantastic write!
Very brilliantly adapted!Kudo's

Glad you have a break in your very busy day,
to post Miss your work! ;-)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 8, 2004

Wow Kay, what cleverness you have. Been nice if none of this happened, but we can't change any past? Hope you've been ok. Tell you little one hi.
Lurve ya! SMooooooooooooo0000000000Chee Man got ya again.
Take special care of that precious heart of yours. x0x0x0x

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on August 8, 2004

This an oldie of mine which I have revised and changed slightly.