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Make no Mistake
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
   Rated "PG" by the Author.
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The coldness
Walks
Into view
Trying to
Undermine you

Elusion-
Was my downfall
A great escape
Magician's wand
Make no mistake

It is bleak
And it shivers
Never giving up
Surrounding you
In darkness-

Being in twilight always.... ... ..



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 Reviews of "Make no Mistake"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 18, 2014
A most effective poem that awakens thoughts and emotions. Thank you, Deborah. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 13, 2014
Umm, very thought provoking poetry indeed!
Warm energy to you!
Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 13, 2014
I sense an underlying sense of aloneness and despair in these words. The cold is real and brought on by the circumstances of the left alone or avoided.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 12, 2014
Yeah, I'm there most of the time.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 12, 2014
great..so very much said here

Reviewed on November 12, 2014
Whoah! Now you KNOW I love this one!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 12, 2014
I shiver to think about it


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