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An Awakening

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Seeing and accepting oneself in mind’s own mirror is not an easy process.


Thursday, November 14, 2013


Poem Artwork
An Awakening
by Odin Roark

The cover of cotton comfort
How secure the asylum
Overhead
Body
Snuggled deep in pre-sleep

How determined we become
To relieve that daily nemesis
Reality’s reminder that fantasy
Desires nothing more than peace

Our minds and hearts
Scream at each other
Wanting only the accord
Available to those who abandon
Make believe beyond

Informative abstract
Accepting not reason and logic
Opting instead for the quick fix of escape
Suffers vacuous results

Where goes the lost potential
The essence struggling for actuation
The reaching ratification of reality
Wanting but understanding
Expecting nothing beyond acceptance?

For the weak
Gravity holds firm
For the strong
Purity of soul renders invisible
Those obstacles reserved for the anemic

The few who open eyelids
Consenting to light and colors
Infiltrating the monochromatic world of failure
Flows a rainbow of understanding

How revelatory the moment
When allowance delivers epiphanies remarkable
Rendering doubt but a glitch
Self-loathing but a challenge
Where outcome is all it needs to be
While pursuing
An awakening
 


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 16, 2013
Your verses awaken the thought process... ...and emotions are born. Thank you, Odin. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Shirley Long
Reviewed on November 15, 2013
Oden, I really enjoyed reading your poem Awakening today. Each verse
is so descriptive of what one's mind and soul must try to sustain in
order to come to grip with one's own feeling and self-worth.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 15, 2013
Oh how I would love to wake up to an epiphany every day! As usual, brilliantly penned.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 15, 2013
Ah, I finally quit, gave up, on my self-loathing, although it fraudulently sustained me for many years. The battle to become as one with yourself, and for the good of yourself, is sometimes never reached, mainly because many people do not believe they are thinking in a wrongheaded way. They follow blindly down their same ond highway of self disillusionment.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 15, 2013
a dep insightful look
budd

Reviewed by Simon Halliday
Reviewed on November 15, 2013
Great poem ... Edgy, un-nerving words, inspiring us to search beyond everyday concepts and ideas in order to fulfil potential.

Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on November 14, 2013
If your afraid to look in the mirror, true mirror of self. Objectively as well as subjectively, then one will continually stay asleep, unaware. In order to make any Change within, one has to fully understand "Why " they react, respond, impulsively act to outside stimuli. If you can't understand yourself, you'll never be able to understand others. Looking in the mirror is never a pleasant act, but it is an act of importance if one wants to begin or continue down the path of awareness. It really matters not if anyone understands your awakening, all these journeys can only be traveled alone. Some may be hidden journeys that you just keep to yourself and all the hidden treasures you've found along the "Way ".

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on November 14, 2013
We speculate about the nature of our own awareness, ever fearful of the other eyes wide-closed. Is the gentle prodding an action based upon a belief or is the belief contingent upon the action? In the doing so we shall be... M.True


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