I have descended recently
Dropped suddenly - to a
much higher place, one
that I haven't been to in
a very long time... it
was quite voluntary; in a
word, I have succumbed
to a warm touch and my
body temperature has
risen several degrees; I
have passed into a
condition quite pleasant;
The greatest part of it all
is that it came totally
unexpected, and it has
brought back feelings
that I was sure were
forgotten; now, a deep
satisfaction exists...
this is quite extraordinary;
Yes, I'm Falling...
'2008' RLS
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Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2009
Anytime these feelings happen...grab em, knock em down and drag em home. They are preciously rare these days.
Full of tender thoughts!
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Full of tender thoughts!
Love Tinka
Regis
Outstanding poemization... This composition takes one on an ontological trip to revise the clouds of man's skies.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bandavi ben-YEHU
" ... decended recently,
Dropped suddenly - to a
much higher place ...." <---------brilliant
There is comfort in these lines. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.