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A Mournful Remembrance
by A Serviceable Villain → (All Poetry by A Serviceable Villain)
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'Sand in the hourglass has stolen what
remains of your life . . . '


Poem Artwork

Scribe, your heart is  like  the

white mark inside a target

Pierced by the quill of your

pen which bleeds black ink.

 

Your love is nothing more than

a mournful remembrance having

an important part to act out, now

in desperate need of company.

 

And like some unhallowed ground

you are destitute and reek of impurity

The armour plating now tarnished

Your face dawns a death mask.

 

No sign of lungs breathing, overtasked

they run the gauntlet through a maze

Desperately seeking a place to once

again be embroidered with air.

 

Scribe, the departure of your faithful lover

now sits upon your thoughts weighing

heavily upon your mind – you put the pen

away in its’ rusty scabbard for all time.

 

Sand in the hourglass has stolen what

remains of your life – only time left to

plunder and pillage any glimmer of hope

that is trying to whitewash your brain.

 

Scribe, all the brokenhearted come to pay

their disrespects metaphorically – you did

not conquer mistrust, rather, it conquered

You now get to live in total regret.

 

 

Ó 2009 R. Lance Sheridan


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 Reviews of "A Mournful Remembrance"
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on March 16, 2011
Your love is nothing more than

a mournful remembrance having

an important part to act out, now

in desperate need of company.

------------ such stark truth...

Gina

Reviewed by John Coppolella
Reviewed on August 19, 2010
Sad and depressing metaphors of truth. Why does this hit home?

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 5, 2009
"From the depths of disapir , the soul rises toward the light". This is written with such depth and emotion! I feel the sadness and pain.......M

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2009
You have captured the "mourning of a lost one" in these words. I imagine many have these feelings after the loss of their life's love.
Creatively written!!
Carol

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 1, 2009
A truly sad and powerful piece, my friend.

Reviewed by Linda Zebsokey
Reviewed on April 1, 2009
Wonderful poem Lance. Truly from the heart. This write has such powerful lines. Well done.

Linda

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2009
Very well written dear man...powerful lines...have a wonderful and safe day hope your friend is doin much better sweet Lance..Hugssss

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 31, 2009
Lance,
This is very demanding emotionally for the reader and I suspect for the writer, too, and it is powerful and moving.
John

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on March 31, 2009
Really Unique And Different To The Point...

TRASK

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 31, 2009
Such tragic emotions scibed in these lines......Superb Poem Lance!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 31, 2009
A meaningful write that incites the reader to think. Thank you, Lance. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on March 31, 2009
Beautifully penned, Lance, power in your words. Thank you. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on March 31, 2009
Hi Lance, the last part wraps around and makes this piece whole. What a mighty pen you wield there and so true of some scribes.

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed on March 31, 2009
Wonderful poem, Lance; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tommy Thomas
Reviewed on March 31, 2009
Very good. A poem to remember that time is measuring my efforts by the pen.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 31, 2009
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva


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