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My Life Reflected
by A Serviceable Villain → (All Poetry by A Serviceable Villain)
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'some were gone, others remained'


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I viewed crepuscular rays

Near paralled my worn life

Places I remembered were

forever, not always for better.

As I looked at my life reflected

Wasn't sure which way was up

or which way was down - past

friends and lovers couldn't help.

The aforementioned all had their

places, had their moments; some

were gone, others remained - with

the light reflected, I still could recall.

But in the shadows were hidden the

dead - even though I loved them, I

chose to forget, they were no longer

among the living; I could hear their cries.

Then began the lies when they rose

from their graves - "Don't worry, there

is no one living that compares with you!"

Didn't work; my father just sighed.

He pointed out the Family Tree that

stood all alone - "If it wasn't for them

and me, you wouldn't be here!" Almost

starting crying; he said, "Get a grip!"

"It will all begin to make perfect sense

once you look at it from the right

perspective;" "The light coming down is

from Heaven - learn to catch its' rays!"

I thanked my dad - gave him one last

hug and told him as he walked away

"Now, I'll often stop and think about

those gone with an open mind!"

'2008' RLS


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 Reviews of "My Life Reflected"
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 18, 2008
Reflections speak to us...they are a blessing. Great poem and image as well Lance!
hugs and love,
Christine

Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Lance,
I enjoyed this look inside your poetic eye, the language of spirit is throughout the verse, and in many perspectives
like a soul expression in the earth bound rhealm, we can hear if we listen...
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Excellent ending!!

"Now, I'll often stop and think about

those gone with an open mind!"


Love Tinka

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on December 16, 2008
Everytime that I read your poetry,I'm always intrigue by what you say and how you express yourself and this is one of them.I enjoy reading this poem.Keep up the great work.I like your style of writing,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on December 16, 2008
OH Lance I loved this...felt like I was right there beside you seeing my dad. OH, tears. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on December 16, 2008
AWESOME

Reviewed on December 16, 2008
Powerful wisdom in these lines of reflection: well done, Lance.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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