Can You Feel My Heart? (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on March 18, 2004

Absolutely superb weaving of words from the both of you. Well done. Great collaboration

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

sweet words of poetic expression Reatta. enjoyed the read. love and peace. G

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

A wonderful collaboration, and very soulful.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

A well-penned collaboration - beautiful write!

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

very lovely...I like this...it works...on many levels...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

Loving expression. Very moving and captivating of the senses. Nice collaboration. Well done. Love and peace to you, Retta. Regis

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

Excellent. Well written. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

Very good! Romantic.

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

Wonderful write and collaboration...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

wonderfully done

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2004

OKAY tyhis is emotive, beautiful , romantic, bittersweet and an outstanding performance of real love.
Beautiful Colloboration.

For In love their is pain, sorrow, lonliness, togetherness,sharing,caring and longing and {FORGIVING}
Beautiful You two bravo.. I have never seen a better duet In my life.

Love You both Lady Peg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 16, 2004

nice collab, you two! this is a great write! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on March 16, 2004

Excellent!
Well done collaboration!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2004

A very lovely collaboration.

Reviewed by Andi Chrisman (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2004

I was definetly feeling this one. Thank you!

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2004

WONDERFUL collaboration Rein and Sanil....Thanks for creating and sharing!

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

this is delicious!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

a beautiful write
good collab
excellent

William

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

Your a good team.....
wonderful poetry......

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

Beautiful poetry.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

Sure Can Been Reading About(Your Heart) Feeling It At Den!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

A lovely, lovely collaboration!
Enjoyed it much.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

You work beautifully together. This is lovely.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

Beautiful collaboration Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

A most beautiful collaboration, Reindeer!

Wonderful romantic poetry, excellently penned!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

A nice collaboration

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

you both worked out a very good poem ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

This is a beautiful romantic write! It spoke in volumes. Great collaboration.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

I agree, wonderful collaboration. I liked the touch of reality to it. Nothing contrived -- yesterday we see this, or that, and it changes today, and again tomorrow, and that's the way of relationships. Good writing.

Carmen

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

Wonderful collaboration Reindeer...
the lines flow beautifully...
I love the inner thoughts here..
floria

Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

I don't know what happened yesterday but it is the ups and downs in a relationship that force us to constructs lasting foundations. I loved this one, it reminded me of what the otherside can be be thinking as much as it reminds me of how I have been.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

Thanks for the care you have shown in writing this . I appreciate your goodness and excellent thoughts that make us good and more good ... thanks for this excellent colloboration... thank u very much