Dreams of the Dead (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

powerfully written

Reviewed by The Smoking Poet

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

How clear the pain and the mixed emotion that so often goes along with it.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on July 7, 2004

scary....agonizing...and dark
nice picture as well
*should have read in the morning:)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 7, 2004

Wonderful prose that shows many layers of emotions. Great write Retta!

~ Sandie May Angel ~

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on July 7, 2004

Prose crafted to perfection, Retta ... par excellence! Robert.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 7, 2004

Brrr! Very effective, Retta. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on July 6, 2004

Surreal, powerfully engaging, masterfully crafted verse!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 6, 2004

(((reindeer)))

a dark, powerfully expressive write--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 6, 2004

An agonizing and sombre window into Hades !!

Wonderful and compelling write Retta

Peter Paton

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

This is an awesome write, for you see beyond this dimension, beyond this realm. There is a lot of power in this write. Most excellently done.
Allen

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

Right You Have No Choice,i.e. Wages Of Sin Is Death_

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

Very moving write

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

When her slim and lovely figure beckons.

Great poem.....

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

Insightful, powerful write.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

WOW!!! I loved it!!! Excellent write Reindeer!!! Had chills running down my spine!!!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

Chilling and haunty but so well written Rein>>>>>>Excellent.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

Haunting, and most profound, Reindeer. Well Done.

Reviewed by Mary Quire

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

Very nicely done. I enjoyed it very much.

M.Rose

Reviewed by Claywoman (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

Wow, This is powerful! Haven't we all had dreams like this though? I know the night my mom died, I heard her voice calling me, she was frightened...I stumbled into her room and just sat there until her spirit left it, then I crawled into her bed and she comforted me with all my tears....

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

Iagree with Robert. And, this must of been a fright...
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Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

i like the double entendre of dreams of the dead ... dreaming of the dead and the dead dreaming ... the vengance of their nightmares bleeding over into our dreams ...

Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

Powerful, compelling piece, Reindeer. There were even chilling moments of the macabre. Haunting...I like the concept of the dead dreaming.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

Reindeer nobody does it better when it comes to this genre!
Fabulous depth, in this haunting dilemma! Superb poem!

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

Nice work ...

"And you�
Asking me to stay,
When all along,
It is you that is leaving! "

Thinking of the truth ....

I like all your write ...