* Written for Sanil's Challenge at firesidepoetry.com, the challenge:
Write a poem describing your favorite season..winter, spring, fall or summer..as if it were you...
I Am Fall
I am autumn’s russet hues,
Muting softly the colors in you,
The raging red and yellow leaves,
Fall from the glorious trees,
Passions of spring growth,
Fading slowly into somber moods,
Long walks soothing with twilight blues,
Damping down the passions in you…
I am fall,
And the children have flown away,
Leaving you a little sadder,
A little more gray…
But there is understanding too,
Life was not meant to be lived,
In a single day…
Now I give you time to pause,
Take inventory of the passing year,
Give you time to shed your golden tears,
Then wipe them clean again,
Wonderful write, Reindeer. I especially love:
"Passions of spring growth,
Fading slowly into somber moods,
Long walks soothing with twilight blues,
Damping down the passions in you…"
Again, I say, "Wonderful!"
Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
The seasons are wonderful to write of.
Thanks for sharing this here.
Nice idea...
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
This was an excellent write ...
ha ha nice ...
Now I give you time to pause,
Take inventory of the passing year,
Give you time to shed your golden tears,
Then wipe them clean again,
As hot as it is here now this was refreshing and love how tlk about fall is time to take inventory and get ready to start anew.
Very enjoyable and well done
Tommy
You've made beauty of beauty itself, in this new-to-me approach to writing a new purposeful pem. After the glow from it fades somewhat, and your fame for having done it so well, subsides a bit, I'm going to sneak off to write- ..."as if I am Spring!" - Bill
Truly gorgeous painting of words you've produced here Retta! Reading it was sort of the same way a cool Fall day relaxes you.
Good write! I'd say you met this challenge well!
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Have a wonderful weekend Retta.......
Love that fall picture.....
Excellent!
TRASK
"Passions of spring growth,
Fading slowly into somber moods,
Long walks soothing with twilight blues,
Damping down the passions in you…"
Again, I say, "Wonderful!"
Thanks for sharing this here.
Nice idea...
ha ha nice ...
Now I give you time to pause,
Take inventory of the passing year,
Give you time to shed your golden tears,
Then wipe them clean again,
Very enjoyable and well done
Tommy
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
TY Retta
**Ch'erie**
Great work!
Best wishes
from
kay
p.s.
Retta,you are still blossoming!
Reindeer
Autumn is indeed so beautiful.
Beautifully written and captured.
Warm Hugs
Elga
M.Rose
Love Tinka
Peter Paton
Good write! I'd say you met this challenge well!
Lisa
and the poem i agree well met
my favorite as well
great job!!!
Challenge met and surpassed!;-)
Warm regards,
Leland