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The Blending of Lives
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*Written for Sanil's Challenge at fireside poetry.



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The Blending of Lives



Problem: She doesn’t speak, he doesn’t Listen, Is there a solution?


Words to use: Patience, Understand, Listen, Love




Our thoughts are mired in unspoken agony,
We rise on angry mornings and I do not speak,
Veiled thoughts when I look at you,
Wishing you could understand-

Just listen you say,
But I have heard you speak all day,
And I tire of your verbal ranting,
I just want to get away!

I seek peace in the mountains,
Its lonely beauty stilling my raging heart,
The flowing streams still my anger,
And I realize I love you despite your ways-

I have no patience for so much talking,
But I struggle to believe the things you say,
My heart and soul is quiet and shy,
I can’t answer you,
When you are always shouting,

When I return home and see your eyes,
It makes me want to cry,
Your heart is so sad,
And I feel so bad,
And want to tell you:

“Baby, I need you to hear me too!
I am not like you!
Sit quietly dear,
And I will strive to tell you,
The shadows of my heart,
I will stay as you speak,
And hear past the anger in your eyes;

Perhaps we can make this work,
And blend our lives as smoothly,
As the raging ocean that meets,
The forgiving shore…

Crash against me,
And I will give,
Perhaps you will see,
That I too have a will,
And when the wave recedes,
I will be here still…


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 Reviews of "The Blending of Lives"
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
You've done a fantastic job with this one...so much truth and feeling

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 4, 2004
Soul-stirring write that awakens thoughts and senses, Retta. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on September 4, 2004
beautifully done

Reviewed by Mary Quire
Reviewed on September 2, 2004
There is such feeling in this poem, I can't help but sympathize. Your words have opened up the gate that has been put up in many relationships. Thank you for sharing this one.

M.Rose

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2004
Crash against me,
And I will give,
Perhaps you will see,
That I too have a will,
And when the wave recedes,
I will be here still…


perfect ending..this is sooooo gooood..love it..saved it!


vesna :)

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
I really enjoyed this because you have shown what it is like to be with someone who is angry and can't express it properly. The thing about anger that most of us forget is that what lies beneath it is sorrow or hurt. The hard part is noticing that while you are in the heat of things, and I find walking is a great way to deal with it. Somehow nature and the peacefulness helps to center me and I can think more clearly. Thanks for this insightful write!

Reviewed on August 31, 2004
Retta,

Another excellent piece from a poetess so unique - brillant write!!

Robert

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2004
You are so masterful at emotive expression. A beautiful poem Retta.

Reviewed on August 31, 2004
Even when they express sad or turbulent emotions, your writings always transmit me an amazing sense of peace, dear Retta.
Thank you, from the heart. Be well,
Love&Light,
Alexandra*

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 30, 2004
Not A Challenge But, Excellent Odd Romantic You Poem!

TRASK

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2004
Wow--so many wonderful lines and thoughts here. A masterpiece of emotions and words.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Superb write, Retta. Wonderful imagery; last stanza says it all. Bravo!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Challenge well met, Reindeer. Touching and well expressed, thank you.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Dear Retta,

Excellent so well written it's great to have such patience and understanding.

There comes a time though when one goes beyond the caring, and listening, And when the wave recedes, I am no longer there...

Well written from the heart.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed on August 29, 2004
(((reindeer)))

this is magnificent, emotive poetry--challenge offered, challenge met and surpassed--a winner, in my eyes *good luck in the contest* BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
great write
enjoed very much
Well Penned

William ....Peace & Love

Reviewed by anne cunningham
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
easier said than done.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Retta, you’ve encapsulated very well the emotional upheavals that couples far too often go through, and forget that each other has their own way of dealing with issues which effects the viability of a relationship. Stunning work and an excellent response and entry for the challenge.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
This is a great poem! I nominate it to be used as the opening, and closing, text of MARRIAGE 101... Thank you, again, for sharing your talent. - Bill

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Wonderful heart/soul touching write! Your poetry is always a joy to read.

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
"I seek peace in the mountains,
Its lonely beauty stilling my raging heart,
The flowing streams still my anger,
And I realize I love you despite your ways- "

Putting it all in perspective, eh?

SueB

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
This is so well done capturing so much and meaning Rein excellent for Sanils challenge....

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
your ability to reach into our hearts and minds with vivid imagery and alturistic sentiment is outstanding ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Reindeer, I'm captured by this magnificent poem!
YOu have such incredible word knowledge!the
metaphor is stunning! Brava!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Crash against me,
And I will give,
Perhaps you will see,
That I too have a will,
And when the wave recedes,
I will be here still…


Retta...superb ending dear friend....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
This is more beautiful and excellent write ... I loved this write and appreciate your talents ... I am so happy you posted this for the challenge. Thanks and thanks a lot ....


Wish you all happiness ....



Reviewed on August 29, 2004
I know this feelings. Sometimes when we speak, it's like no one is listening, or that whatever we say are of no importance in compared to theirs.

You have penned this poem so well.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
This is an awesome write Retta,just excellent and very profound.
Best wishes always
from
kay

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
A magnificent poem rich in forgiveness and understanding beyond the reach of pain...
You do this so well Retta...
Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Powerfully penned, and I agree on the marvelous last stanza, Reindeer; and that is one fabulous photo.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
The symbolism in this write is wonderful as is that pic of an angry ocean.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Another beautiful piece Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Very nice. I especially like the last stanza.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Wow, beautifully done Retta.....Love that last stanza.....ty, Dani


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