In a place without honor and everlasting sin,
We created a world to live in,
You and I...
Where you sought to give me a reason,
To stop wanting to die.
Dark Knight and his Red Queen...
Living a life few have ever seen,
He walks through the world like a king-
This gladiator who fights his battles in the ring...
And I,
I merely hold the crown...
I wish I could have realized,
Before it was all said and done,
The thing we gave birth to,
Would also be Your Son...
I Tried!
I tried to shape him,
I tried to mold him to my soul,
Dear God,
How was I too know-
The Evil in you would show...
Would manifest itself in everything you touched,
Even me-
Why couldn't I see...
His beauty would be fleeting,
His wholeness uncentered-
His soul cracked and bleeding,
Your black blood flowing in his veins...
I should have remembered,
In hell it never rains-
There would be no way to wash him clean,
Rinse the blood from his hands,
Find a pool of clear, clean water,
Baptize him...Save him from his father!
This child with an evil grin,
Smiles at me...Stares at him-
Has my heart, but his Daddy's soul,
I wish I had known,
What it was I was thinking,
When I dared to give birth...
Gave you progeny,
To spread among the Earth...
Reindeer....oh so powerful and deep this is...I must go read it again..I think I might not have taken it all in with the first read...this is one to read slowly and savor...great write...floria
Reindeer, you stunned me,I'm speechless with this one!It reeks with the stench of stygian places while it is so beautifully written.Such a dichotomy;-)Superb!
DANG!!! This hits home BIG TIME!!
Like father like son!!
Tried!
I tried to shape him,
I tried to mold him to my soul,
Dear God,
How was I too know-
The Evil in you would show...
Would manifest itself in everything you touched,
Even me-
The gifted and fascinating Urban Poet, Asa D Seeley, once again speaks. He introduces a New Genre of Poetry...Reality Confrontation. Juxtaposed with Essay and staying true to his unique style, Asa brings a breath of...fresh air...to the world of poet
hope it is not autobiographical.
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Outstanding writing!
....
I should have remembered,
In hell it never rains-
Nancy
~Jackie~
:)Sandy
Tami
Like father like son!!
Tried!
I tried to shape him,
I tried to mold him to my soul,
Dear God,
How was I too know-
The Evil in you would show...
Would manifest itself in everything you touched,
Even me-
This really made me sad!!
love Tinka
Teresa Emilie