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Eternally Bound...
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Eternally Bound Sadness, A weariness that pierces the bone, Catharsis, I bleed away the pain, Try to keep from going insane… Sorrow deep in the marrow of my bones, Like the ring on my finger, I am eternally bound… Your whispers wash over me, And the shadow of the moon Covers me in sweet darkness, I sink into the softness of the night, Melancholy afflicts me, And I see rainbows in the sea, Unsettling waves turns them to rings, Floating gently on the sea, Like me, Like me…

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Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on September 29, 2003

Sigh ! Wonderful
And I love rainbows, even if they make me cry.
Nico

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on September 21, 2003

((((Reindeer)))) So sad but beautiful. Yet with the rainbow of hope.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 19, 2003

Awesome write indeed, Reindeer! Love this!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on September 19, 2003

Always a little light at the end of the rainbow and it is called hope...never lose that hope Retta!
Superb writing!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on September 19, 2003

Reindeer,
So beautiful
"Your whispers wash over me,
And the shadow of the moon
Covers me in sweet darkness,
I sink into the softness of the night,

Melancholy afflicts me,
And I see rainbows in the sea,
Unsettling waves turns them to rings,
Floating gently on the sea,
Like me,
Like me… "
PJ

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

Beautiful but sad....emotionally touching piece to me!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

Sheer beauty..both poem and pic..
Jenni

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

What a profound and deeply touching write - so rich in emotion and imagery. Well done!

Tami

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

Oh wow Retta,this is just so beautiful,sad too.
Hope all is well with you.
Best wishes always
love from
Kay

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

Love the imagery, Reindeer, with a touch of hope at the end. Never lose hope.... great write...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

The beautiful colors of the rainbow are a reflection of sunbeams through droplets of rain... like a smile sparkling through tears. After this darkened sky - even if it has inspired an exquisite poem - a glorious rainbow is what I wish for you, dearest Reindeer.
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

the ring imagery reminded me of life preservers... well done...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

Hi agree with Eileen..........
The picture goes great with your write
Have a great night!

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

I love a mystery, and you have presented an interesting one for us here. the rainbow analogy is wonderful. great poem. TY

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

a deep write, but know this all things come to an end.. one can sit and wait on fate or choose to make their own

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

WOW...your darkness is something! Ok, so what part of your soul did you carve this from? Just ---sounds so love/hate and damned if you do...damned if you don't. Your verse is quite captivating!

Thanks,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

Great write.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

Reindeer....I could feel the hope in this poem...simply lovely...floria

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

this is just lovely Retta. Great write. Lisa

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

great poem retta

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 18, 2003

Beautifully written from deep dark soul places...still a rainbow of hope;-)

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