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Screams In The Night...
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Screams In The Night




The city screamed tonight,
Waking me from my uneasy sleep,
Steel wheels on iron rails,
Screeching in such an eerie way,
The howling of that lonely sound,
Sounding like a wounded growl…

I woke and listened to the dark roads groan,
Under the heavy weight of a million lost souls,
Traveling too fast on unknown paths,
And watched as the earth gave way at last…

The stone walls and steel fences,
Meant to mend,
But what are they caging in?
To what end?

I listen to the city cry,
And wondered if this was why,
So many walk in deep despair,
A million people but none of them care…

Hate and madness so intertwined,
Served on gold lined platters to all mankind,
Children with eyes that glitter,
Invisible electrons their baby-sitter…

Where are the flowers and trees?
In walled and gated gardens,
That nobody sees…

Where are the animals and birds in the trees?
Caged and chained in silver filigrees,
I don’t even hear the wind here-
Where is the breeze?

So empty and desolate,
This city is too dead for me,
Back to my mountain I flee,
Where everything there is free!

My god,
How soul killing is your world there!
No wonder you do not dare to live,
There is nothing you can give,
Nothing to see but stone and steel,
All dead!

And in the night,
The city moans,
I hear it groan,
Under the weight,
Of a million dead souls!

Each separate-
Each alone-
Don’t you know,
Each gentle leaf is a part of me?
A part of you,
Making us we?

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 Reviews of "Screams In The Night..."
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
Awesome write, Retta!

Reviewed on October 8, 2003
(((reindeer)))

i love the city, but the country as well--a wonderful, thought provoking write

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
Spooky and dark. Interesting write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
This is such unforgettable poetry REindeer! Filled with the stark emptiness that life can be when we are in the wrong place. Superb work!

Reviewed on October 7, 2003
spooky and chilling write; glad i live in a little city, and not a big one like dallas or fort worth! YIKES! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :0

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
awesome reindeer
an excellent write
the city can be very cruel

William

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
Excellent write


"Each separate-
Each alone-
Don’t you know,
Each gentle leaf is a part of me?
A part of you,
Making us we?
"

Keep smiling ....:)

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
Wow! Well done Reindeer. I'm glad I live in a small town.

Jack

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
Powerful write on the dark side of things!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
Magical work of excellence..

Reviewed on October 7, 2003
Deeply moving, very powerful lines.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
Powerful write...deep deep write....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
There's nothing like the country, but
some people are not able to handle the
solitude and vastness. ;) I love it
myself! Great write!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
Retta, this is excellent, written with an ear trained to a different life. I agree with some that there can be life in the city. I have a daughter who finds it there, would not be happy without her organized chaos. But I, a country boy at heart, have tried it and found it terribly wanting, just as you do. I guess its different strokes for different folks. As with you, I love the mountains.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
I agree packs punch...some fantastic images...Damn fine write. I hate the city....I live an hour from it...I can't wait to get home after a day up there. Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
Boo! I like ghost.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
A very powerful poem, Reindeer, in stark contrast to the mountains that you love so much.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
so sad can the city be, but if you look alittle deeper there is even life in steel.. it can be warmed by just a human touch... we need to reach out to others more... this is a great write

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
Excellent write of the dark side of the city.


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