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I Am...(For the challenge)
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I Am…
(For The Challenge)



I am the shadow,
That haunts your mind,
The whisper that you hear
Borne to you on the wind,
The shade of love,
You dare not reveal,
The secret you keep in your heart...

Raised in another time,
When the earth sang songs
And the people danced
To her lovely beat,
As she turned…

I am from;

The Forest of the Moon,
Where shadows lay,
Even at noon,
Haunting and frightening,
But never to me,
They were my friends you see,
And hid me from all of you,
With no words to tell you the truth
Of what you want to hear,

I sit silent and mute,
But hear everything,
See all you do not want to believe,
I stand alone at the edge of time
And stare into my doom,

But I do not weep,
Nor do I smile,
I simply wait here for a while,
For my true love to call my name,
And life will begin again...

I am,
A child of the forest,
Raised by the lovely trees,
Fed on their stories,
They whispered in the early morning breeze,
Listened to the wild flowers,
Who taught me to smile,
And the creatures of the forest,
Who taught me life could be worth while…

I am the secret you keep in your heart,
The one you reveal to no one,
The one that tears your life apart-
The child inside that you keep safe and whole,
The one you let no body know…

I am,
The writer of words,
And stories and songs,
The ones that you once heard,
In your dreams at night,
But now no longer listen…

I am a native of the Land,
Who hears the earth speak,
And write its echoes upon the printed page,
A blind woman who hears the eagles scream,
And the moon cry…

I am…

Reindeer.






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 Reviews of "I Am...(For the challenge)"
Reviewed by Steve Robertson
Reviewed on December 8, 2003
Very nice. It is easy for the reader to empathize with the thoughts conveyed by the words.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
You are all you should be......A wonderfully talented soul.....with a heart as big as Australia.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
Why didn't you just say "I AM A FIGHTER--BRING IT ON because I can take it and show you where you can put your angst and hardships" Woman--you rock and leave me in awe! You are a gifted soul.

Thank You,
Emilie

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
Hi Retta,
Bravo!!!!
This is truly outstanding.


Trixie :)

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
" I'm Reindeer "

No doubt on that ..
You are Reindeer.
Its Proud to say ..
You are Reindeer.

Excellent way to express yourself ...
Excellent write and great ....

Thanks for this cute write ...


Huggs

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
I am…

Reindeer.

YOU are an ANGEL!!!

This piece was remarkable..glorious in its wisdom ..ty sooo much!

Vesna

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
Reindeer, as ever, you express your singular uniqueness in such a calm and artistic way that it just draws the reader in...! A wonderful portrait of a modern warrior-woman and artist! Thanks for the peek into your mind and soul!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
Good response, Retta. I like the part nature plays in it. Good composition.

Carmen

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Haunting in message and beauty, Reindeer...visual and lovely.

Truly poetic.

Gina

Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
This is simply incredibly beautiful
I am thankful for what you are.

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Your poetry is absolutely brilliant! Your words are filled with passion and evoke tremendous emotions. Very awesome poetry.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Breathtaking poetry, Reindeer. A wonderful response to the challenge
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Beautiful imagery wrapped in the soothing wisdom of a hopeful message. Thank you for this offering. Regis

Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Loved it, loved it , loved it. Thanks.

Reviewed by Michael Curry
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Lovely! An earthy poem with heart and feeling. I really like the reflections in nature that are so carefully woven through this piece.

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Beautiful saged imagery excellent for the challenge so nice to meet you Reindeer.


Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
All morning I have read such wonderful poetry and this write was too beautiful for words. You are an accomplished poetress whose words move mountains.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Retta, You are woman. I hear your roar.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Just beautifully written Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Reindeer this soars off the page to ride the thermal winds with the Eagles...Exceptionally beautiful!

Reviewed on November 21, 2003
beautiful write, just like you, reindeer; enjoyed reading this gentle poem about yourself! a fine response to michael curry's challenge; BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D love you, reindeer!

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
very pretty Raindeer, Al

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Truly beautiful write...it sings!!!
Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Beautiful piece. Honest words always make a good read!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Yes, Reindeer, you are all that nature holds. Just a lovely accounting. Thanks for sharing yourself with the rest of us. Enjoyed. Lisa

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Excellent ending to a very heart felt write and introduction to who you are. Thank you for the sharing and great addition to the challenge.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
"I am,
A child of the forest,
Raised by the lovely trees,
Fed on their stories,
They whispered in the early morning breeze,
Listened to the wild flowers,
Who taught me to smile,
And the creatures of the forest,
Who taught me life could be worth while… "

Reindeer....MAGNIFICENT....touching my heart....floria

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Child of the forest, this is a fabulous challenge entry. Your words always inspire.

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
AMAZING write, Retta! I am amazed by the depth in this GEM!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
This is so lovely.


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