Just Breathe... (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

Reindeer, your writing is exceptional

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on January 26, 2004

Profound write....fantastic write...as deep as ever from you.....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2004

Can feel pain and love in these vewrses.

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on January 26, 2004

oh boy, did I feel this one! Excellent!! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love

Reviewed on January 26, 2004

LOVED this! Excellent work!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Exellent write .... reindeer
enjoyed much

William

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

My mind and body responded as I read these verses. Powerfully emotive and meaningful, Retta. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

you are so good at getting the reader to feel deep emotions...excellent

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Hi Reindeer...I really and truly felt this poem..first the picture set me up...dark dark picture...and then the words...I almost lost my breath.....just reading this..Great writing...floria

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Hi Retta,
This is soooo beautiful...

Fantastic job!!!!

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Really haunting and left me breathless.

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

I could feel my chest clenching shut as I read this...deeply moving writing.

Andrea

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Amazing indepth write! A gem!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Deep meanignful passionate thoughts, well expressed...

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Intirguingly deep write Retta. Darkened words interwoven into a tpestry of beauty

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Truly beautiful , Reindeer.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

What a compelling image here, Reindeer. Wonderfully expressed.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Wonderful expression, Reindeer.

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Dark castles and storm clouds can never keep me from you. I shall light your night with sceptre of love. Fear not, for your breath is life to me, and my heart is now owned by your soul. Retta, you have such splendid imagery. Wow! I am definitely taken in by this! -- Jeff

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Very crafty and wonderful construction..Your heart seeps through your quill into your poem..

Debashish

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Good morning Retta. Missed your fine writes. This is truly beautiful. An exceptional write.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Wow, lift yourself out of there
Extremely well written.....

Reviewed by Andi Chrisman (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

beautiful! This one definatly struck a cord in me...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Excellent display of emotions of the dark.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Great discripition, just love going to those plases in your pic at night, they have such an even more potent feel to our great heritage, love this..

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

"Just Breathe..." sounds esoteric, despite its clear closing lines.

A stimulating and thoughts' developer poem, I have enjoyed.

Happy Healthy Sunday!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Extremely haunting poem and pic, Reindeer.

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Brilliant! The imagry, the emotion, just...Brilliant!

Michael