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Final Journey
I’m ready now,
To lay you down,
Kiss your smooth brow,
And send you on your way…
I will place some gifts here for you,
In case you have need,
Though some may say,
Those days have forever gone away…
I will dip my flask,
In the cool stream,
In case you get thirsty,
And need a drink,
To refresh your strength…
I will make fresh bread,
Just the way you always liked it,
And wrap some meat,
In a deer-hide pouch,
In case this final journey,
Finds you weak…
I will wrap my shawl,
Around your shoulders,
In case the North Winds,
Began to blow,
And you find yourself
Becoming cold…
I will place a gentle kiss,
On your forehead,
And whisper words of love,
To shore up your heart,
In case it needs a reminder,
Of how much you were loved…
How much I wish,
We were traveling this road together,
But I shall lay my staff,
By your side to lean on,
In case you become weary,
And I am not there,
To hold you up…
I’m ready now,
To let you go on,
Though my heart is breaking,
And it is your face,
I keep seeing in the ripples,
Reflecting off the gentle pond…
I never thought this day would come,
But the sun is fading fast,
And the day is done…
I’m ready now to let you go on,
Though I shall always hear
You singing in the breeze,
And see you at night,
In my dreams…
Good-bye my sweet one,
Smooth path and safe journey,
Walk in beauty,
Always…
Kahama eyya manay ka`aay,
(I will not forget you)
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SG
the feeling of having to let someone go....I have never read
a poem of death as lovely as this....it pulled at my heart....
a keeper....bless you...floria
excellent
William
It is hard to let the ones we love go but we must ofcourse,luckily so often they come running back,that's the good part.I loved the loine you used about the staff and leving it for them to lean on also the part about the sein their face in the pond reflection in the water,what a great image of missing someone!I really missed reading you whilst away on holiday.
Best wishes always
from
kay
Your friend from India,
Debashish
ty, Dani
Carmen
Reflecting off the gentle pond"
beautiful and sad imagery. Touching :(
NJAN NINNE SHEHIKUNU ...
JEEVANU THULLIYUM SHEHIKUNUUU ...
NINTE JEEVITHATHINTEE AVASANA YATHAYIL
NJANUM NINTE KUDE ONDAVUM ...
:)
Great Write ...
Take care
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Had to take a serious break. What language is I will not forget you?
Vicky
powerful, beautiful expression of the final journey
BRAVA, dear (((friend)))
((((HUGS)))) and love,
karla. :(
Have a great day today!
Love Tinka
This has a wonderful, peaceful feel to it. This touches so deeply... Absolutely beautiful, Thank you.
Michael
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
generation to generation. A most beautiful Legacy.
I need a dust pan and broom to start gathering the pieces of my heart that broke apart after this one.
This touched so deeply.
John
Gary