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Final Journey
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Final Journey


I’m ready now,
To lay you down,
Kiss your smooth brow,
And send you on your way…

I will place some gifts here for you,
In case you have need,
Though some may say,
Those days have forever gone away…

I will dip my flask,
In the cool stream,
In case you get thirsty,
And need a drink,
To refresh your strength…

I will make fresh bread,
Just the way you always liked it,
And wrap some meat,
In a deer-hide pouch,
In case this final journey,
Finds you weak…

I will wrap my shawl,
Around your shoulders,
In case the North Winds,
Began to blow,
And you find yourself
Becoming cold…

I will place a gentle kiss,
On your forehead,
And whisper words of love,
To shore up your heart,
In case it needs a reminder,
Of how much you were loved…

How much I wish,
We were traveling this road together,
But I shall lay my staff,
By your side to lean on,
In case you become weary,
And I am not there,
To hold you up…

I’m ready now,
To let you go on,
Though my heart is breaking,
And it is your face,
I keep seeing in the ripples,
Reflecting off the gentle pond…

I never thought this day would come,
But the sun is fading fast,
And the day is done…
I’m ready now to let you go on,

Though I shall always hear
You singing in the breeze,
And see you at night,
In my dreams…

Good-bye my sweet one,
Smooth path and safe journey,
Walk in beauty,
Always…


Kahama eyya manay ka`aay,
(I will not forget you)


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 Reviews of "Final Journey"
Reviewed on April 20, 2004
I like your composition, the photograph is beautiful; as if it testifies your original upbringing.

SG
























Reviewed on February 6, 2004
A very nice poetic farewell Reatta. Enjoyed the read, love and peace G

Reviewed by evan horetsky
Reviewed on February 6, 2004
very beautiful work...take a bow

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2004
REindeer how I relate to this one...tears.....it brought tears...
the feeling of having to let someone go....I have never read
a poem of death as lovely as this....it pulled at my heart....
a keeper....bless you...floria

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on February 4, 2004
This makes me want to cry.........its so beautiful!! applause!!!!!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 3, 2004
A wonderful write ....reindeer
excellent

William

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2004
Stunning yet sad poem

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 3, 2004
This is another winner from you...deep deep write!!!!

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on February 2, 2004
Wow Reindeer,what a beautiful yet sad haunting poem,it touched me,really it did.
It is hard to let the ones we love go but we must ofcourse,luckily so often they come running back,that's the good part.I loved the loine you used about the staff and leving it for them to lean on also the part about the sein their face in the pond reflection in the water,what a great image of missing someone!I really missed reading you whilst away on holiday.
Best wishes always
from
kay

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2004
That is wonderful..emotive effects garnish the poem with own beauty..KUDOS for posting this..

Your friend from India,
Debashish

Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2004
Reindeer, this is beautiful. What a tender stream of thoughts. So powerfully woven.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2004
You have an amazing way to get all of your emotion across to us all......this is beautiful...

ty, Dani

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Very touching poem. Although the offerings were beyond the needs of those who embark on that final journey, it was touching to see the care and love wrapped in that final good bye, as survivors still see life as our terrestrial existance. Well done -- very tender.

Carmen

Reviewed by Andi Chrisman (Reader)
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
"I keep seeing in the ripples,
Reflecting off the gentle pond"
beautiful and sad imagery. Touching :(

Reviewed by Sanilnath G (Reader)
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
This is truely excellent ... "FINAL JOURNEY".

NJAN NINNE SHEHIKUNU ...
JEEVANU THULLIYUM SHEHIKUNUUU ...
NINTE JEEVITHATHINTEE AVASANA YATHAYIL
NJANUM NINTE KUDE ONDAVUM ...


:)


Great Write ...

Take care



...

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Oh Reideer, shouldn't have read this at work -- made me cry.
Had to take a serious break. What language is I will not forget you?
Vicky

Reviewed on January 31, 2004
(((reindeer)))

powerful, beautiful expression of the final journey

BRAVA, dear (((friend)))

((((HUGS)))) and love,

karla. :(

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Such a loving and tender expression, Retta. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Always worth the read Reindeer.....
Have a great day today!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Reindeer, this is a jewel to cherish! Your expressions are so superbly wrought. I love your poetry!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
The beauty of letting go shines in this peom. Fantastic write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Most beautiful Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Reindeer,
This has a wonderful, peaceful feel to it. This touches so deeply... Absolutely beautiful, Thank you.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Emotive well formed, gentle poem..

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Another triumph. Bravo.

Michael

Reviewed on January 31, 2004
wonderfully moving write, reindeer; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Retta...this is one that deserves to be passed down from
generation to generation. A most beautiful Legacy.

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Wow.
I need a dust pan and broom to start gathering the pieces of my heart that broke apart after this one.
This touched so deeply.
John

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Extremely loving and heartfelt sentiments for one sadly departing on The Final Journey. We should all be so lucky to have such feelings expressed for us on our final journies. Wonderfully penned, Reindeer.

Reviewed by Gary Gebert
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
I can see you down the path. Great writing!

Gary

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
A great and love filled poem for a lost one in this world but not the next


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