Dawn breaks,
Finding us at the ruins,
Of this old castle,
I am bone weary,
Have traveled too many days,
Missing the warmth of your touch,
Just want to come home now,
Feeling you so far away,
Missing you so much…
The day wears on,
And dust clogs my throat,
I cannot hear your lovely song,
Nor see the vision of your face,
In my dreams…
I am bone weary,
My heart is so heavy,
I want to come home…
Should I say it aloud?
Cry your name and beat my breast?
The battles which once raged in my heart,
And soothed my anger,
No longer mean what they did,
I am tired of fighting now,
Seek only your warm embrace,
And sweet kisses on my face…
I look upon these ruins,
And see my face carved on the tomb!
Wandering these many years,
Seeking retribution for my rage,
Now I seek only to rest my bones,
And smother my soul in your sweet scent,
I am tired of being alone,
Look for me my sweet love,
I am coming home…
Superb, splendid, and magnificent. Words of heart penned so well.
Allen
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
Home is where the heart is Rein
Beautiful
"No longer mean what they did,
I am tired of fighting now,
Seek only your warm embrace,
And sweet kisses on my face…
I look upon these ruins,
And see my face carved on the tomb!
Wandering these many years,
Seeking retribution for my rage,
Now I seek only to rest my bones,
And smother my soul in your sweet scent,
I am tired of being alone,
Look for me my sweet love,
I am coming home… "
Excellent ability to get inside's a man's head, hear his voice, his yearning!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
Beauterifik write, nice feel to this write, great stuff..
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
Wonderful poem..and happy valentine day..BTW thanks for your review on my work..
Inkwell
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
Excellent
Look for me my sweet love,
I am coming home…
Loved it
.....
Like to add few lines to it ...
Door Open ... Heart Open
Welcome to my heart of love ...
For this wonderful valentine ...
Waiting to wish you the valentine ...
Praying for a beautiful another day ...
Just as life during the pandemic was color-coded with different hues representing different levels of danger, life in its aftermath has become shaded in similar ways. As a self-styled “Seeker of Beauty with Beauty,” (borrowing from a quote by W.E.B.
excellent, emotive write--presented in lovely form--thank you for sharing
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. *tears*
So moving are your words...
Excellently written!
Love, Sheila
So beautiful and moving.
And smother my soul in your sweet scent,
I am tired of being alone,
Look for me my sweet love,
I am coming home…"
Ah Reindeer, how moving! Very, very nice!
Michael
happy Valentines Day!!
Love Tinka
Andrea
I have noticed that You are at the ripest point. This year your are writing many anthological pieces. Blest be Your heart!
I Salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
William
Allen
Beautiful
"No longer mean what they did,
I am tired of fighting now,
Seek only your warm embrace,
And sweet kisses on my face…
I look upon these ruins,
And see my face carved on the tomb!
Wandering these many years,
Seeking retribution for my rage,
Now I seek only to rest my bones,
And smother my soul in your sweet scent,
I am tired of being alone,
Look for me my sweet love,
I am coming home… "
Peggy
Inkwell
Look for me my sweet love,
I am coming home…
Loved it
.....
Like to add few lines to it ...
Door Open ... Heart Open
Welcome to my heart of love ...
For this wonderful valentine ...
Waiting to wish you the valentine ...
Praying for a beautiful another day ...
Thankyou
HUGGS 4 U
Credit For Excellent Write!
TRASK