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In Search of Virtue
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Friday, March 20, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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In Search of Virtue

I don’t often venture into the domain of theology unless I can make a logical or a philosophical connection to it. To that end the rules of argumentation are my link to the subject of this essay with poetic addition. These rules say that any argument must cohere, that is, all of the supporting facts and evidence must be logical extensions of each other, without contradictions, and the analysis must allow for competing conclusions to the extent that they have not been negated by facts or other evidence.

Here is the general argument about the “good” life that I hear on a regular basis that disturbs my logical impulses. It is the belief that each person must avoid the list of sins mentioned in the 10 commandments, that he or she must attend church, and pray on a more or less regular basis. Toss a few dollars into the collection basket and you’ve met your obligations, and you’re on your way to heaven.

Such a narrow point of view completely ignores all the atrocities that are going on in the world, and our obligation to do something about them, while ignoring the less fortunate among us. I am referring to issues such as hunger, disease, famine, pestilence, slavery, terrorism, deforestation, pollution, HIV-Aids, human rights abuses, depletion of energy sources, climate change, global water shortages, land use degradation, and population growth. Are these not moral issues that call out to one and all to resolve? Few of us can be the moral champion of all causes, but silence on the major issues is not neutrality; it is acquiescence to them. “Speak out: All that is necessary for evil to prevail is for men of good will to do nothing” is a rejoinder that could easily have come down from Mt. Sinai with Moses and etched into stone as the 11th commandment.

We probably need to go back and re-think what constitutes the “good” life. Reciting prayers and singing hymns were likely not in Socrates’ repertoire of activities in his search for virtue. More likely he considered such attributes as simplicity, honesty, trustworthiness, humility, humor, generosity, tolerance, courage, and a forgiving heart as having far more importance than the limited notions of virtue often held today by church goers. We might also consider the Golden Rule and our innate knowledge of “the right thing to do” as having more weight in guiding our actions than the pronouncements of clerics.

In recent history Mohandas Gandhi listed the seven deadly sins as “wealth without work, pleasure without conscience, science without humanity, knowledge without character, politics without principle, commerce without morality, and worship without sacrifice.” He was onto something. To his credit he did not add…”or else!”

And so, dear reader, here is my poetic contribution to this subject written without malice but in the hope that it may add something of value to the conversation while elevating in purpose and stature those of us otherwise known as “heathens.”
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Sin

We know it when we see it
It’s the bane of the human soul
It soils the good
Not like it should
Lets the bad take its deadly toll.
But…
Which is worse –
A sin of commission or
A sin of omission?
Aye, there’s the rub
Let’s explore this dichotomy
Not extol it.

We know all about the doer
He takes, robs, thrashes and flails
We know him by his acts
He’s brazen as can be
And he often ends up shackled and in jail.
He breaks the rules and
Steals your jewels
Who in blazes can trust him?
Not you, and definitely not me.

But the other kind of sinner
He’s harder to detect
He goes to church
And sings those hymns
You simply would not suspect
Dressed in Sunday best
He walks the line
But…
Judge him not for who knows
What it is that defines a virtuous life?
Does someone who lifts our spirits, enriches our lives,
and propels us forward on the road to moral,
intellectual, and spiritual enlightenment
count in our scheme of things?
Are not simplicity, courage, honesty, trustworthiness,
humility, humor, tolerance, and a forgiving heart
virtues as valuable as singing songs of praise?
Are speaking out and supporting efforts against
hunger, disease, famine, pestilence, slavery,
terrorism, deforestation, pollution, HIV-Aids,
human rights abuses, depletion of energy sources,
climate change, global water shortages, land use
degradation, and population growth not moral issues
that soil our souls and cast our otherwise good intentions
onto the road to hell?

None of us can be the moral champion to all causes,
But silence about them is not neutrality;
It is acquiescence to them.
And so, always seeking to improve
Desiring a kind and forgiving heart
Who dares to condemn and then pretend
Greater knowledge or more insight
Into the lasting virtues?—
Still, there is something about your
Judgmental demeanor and
Your proselytizing that set off my
Logic violation detector
And I am having a hard time
Resetting it to zero.

    

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Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on March 28, 2015
you are a deep thinker and your thoughts are wise.

Reviewed on March 22, 2015
Great final lines.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
your final verse bull's eyes this poems affect ...

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
...yes...."strong minds discuss ideas..."

"God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference" (sic)

...and you don't need religion...others...to allow the serenity prayer...to keep you going...embrace human spirit...to make your life...bearable....when it hurts so much...
God bless y'all and give you peace of mind!
Thank you Edward for sharing your outstanding writing.

Reviewed by CHANTI LACE
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
Great writing... Enjoyed

Reviewed by Danae Wilkin
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
Socrates got it right. Plus, you ask which is more virtuous: a sin of commission or a sin of omission, the former being obvious like theft, and the latter being living a pious life but secretly not, holding back information about himself so he can can lie to you and rob right beneath your nose and usually not get caught. This is more dangerous and evil of the two. Duplicitous are they and brazen in their own way. The third option is to be yourself, trying to be as virtuous as possible and learning and admitting your mistakes. Religion clouds everything. Kindness doesn't need it because it is universal despite any church or mosque or temple or the freedom from religion atheist. As the Bible says, "There is no greater religion than this, to take care of widows and orphans," so action is more important than piety. Thus our environment is not about "caring" but doing nothing while the immoral continue to rape and pillage Earth.

Thanks for sharing Ed. :)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
Once again, your essay, bolstered by your poem has given the reader pause to reflect on what is morality. Like you show so well, I think morality comes from philosophy and not from religion. While philosophy points the way to forgiveness for all sorts of human behavior, religion tends to categorize behavior and define morality in narrow, simplistic terms that appeal to those philosophically weak.

The very idea that a simple request, a prayer, can have one "forgiven of their sins," is so appealing, along with the idea that, there will be a "heavenly life," after this one, makes for a powerful deterrent to doing anything positive about the world's problems while making sure to be seeped in faith, even to the point of hypocrisy heaped on ignorance.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
I think the problem is the constant bombardment of news reporting the evils in the world, and we become desensitized to it all unless it happens in our own backyard. Wise words in this write.

Michael D.

Reviewed on March 20, 2015
I live my life and let others live theirs. We can't all be of one mind. All due respect intended............although!!!!! I was once propositioned by a Sunday School Teacher when I was 11 years old. There ya go!!!

Love ya!!

Jane

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 20, 2015
Then dear lady, Lark, I am one hopeless person as my mind is not even strong enough to read any more than the first paragraph put forth by Mr. Socrate's...so alas, I can not comment on this lengthy rambling by this most commendable author, but I will say this...I can't remember what the hell I was going to say...oh well, mr. "Other Ed", u get my gist, I hope you do cause I certainly do not...-e-

Reviewed by Lark Pogue
Reviewed on March 20, 2015
I feel so privileged just to be able to read your brilliance. Anyone who reads your words and does not become a better person is a hopeless one.


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