These lines depicted an intense and dark vision of death in quite a captivating way. This would be an excellent start to a short novel or short story, and could lead to a perfect description of a villian. To live without a soul, death would indeed be preferred. Overall great piece!
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
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