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A Creative Setback...and Opportunity
5/14/2008 2:58:27 AM


What do you do when you find out your manuscript isn't good enough?





First, you mope.

I'd hiked the Inca Trail to Peru's Machu Picchu -- one of the seven wonders of the world; I'd taken that experience and embedded it into the manuscript of BLUFF, my second mystery/suspense novel in the Lark Chadwick series; I'd gotten a lot of constructive feedback which I'd molded and kneaded into six drafts of the manuscript; then I'd sent it to my agent who has just informed me that it still needs more work.

BUMMER! (Or words to that effect.)

After getting the bad news, I made a brief visit to the dark side, but quickly realized it's not a pretty place to hang out. I've been depressed before and it's no fun. So...I jumped on the treadmill to get some exercise and then got to work with revisions.

To be sure, I have a long way to go, but one thing making the process less daunting is an organizational technique I outlined in a previous blog posting. Early in the writing process I created a document that enables me to get an overview of all the scenes in the novel. So, rather than slogging through the manuscript line by painful line, I can first assess the scope of the novel from a more detached distance. You might call it Brooding from Above.

I'll get bogged down in the minutia soon enough, but for now I'm getting ideas for how to whip this sucker into a shape that my agent will love. That's the challenge. At least, in my disappointment, I have hope.



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• Heading to the Inca Trail - Saturday, September 15, 2007
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