She Beckons (poem) by Jack R Roberts on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente

Reviewed on October 5, 2004

I loved this Jack!
Creative and romantic.
Well written.

Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

Jack...fantastic write my friend...glad to read you again after a long hiatus...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 28, 2004

Wonderfully created with superb rhyme and rythm, Jack. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 23, 2004

this is fantastic ... perfect meter & rhyme ...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2004

I absolutely love this, the mood the story, outstanding work, Jack.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

This is magical, so sweet........I love it......this is the REASON why you are one of my favorites here........and I only have a few!!! I bow to your talent of story telling dear woodpecker friend! lolol.....this shows heart and talent.......such longing.........i can feel his anxity and emotions.......excellent!!! saving it! A :)

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

well done.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

This was so beautiful, lovely and sad,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

This is love unconditioned and some of us here know the feeling. This is timeless and yes! I remember this poem from last year. It stayed with me as one of your best. Thanks for reposting it Jack.
Susan

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Very lovely and romantic write, although it was a little bit sad, but it has a wonderful ending.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

OMG Jack I saved this one way back then and just did it again!!

This still remains your best poem ever..{in my eyes anyways}!!

So touching and beautiful...each time I read it ..it makes me cry!!

I think our writes today made some connection with the ocean...and our love for it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Debbie Wilson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

Lord have Mercy! This is full of such emotion, I really love it, nice job!

Debbie Wilson

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

Very romantic tale. Great write.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

this lifted my spirits, Jack. it was so very lovely. Dawn

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

Jack,it reads like an enchanting fairytale,
so beautifully written!I love it!;-)