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Praying for Rain ~revised for contest ~
by Jack R Roberts → (All Poetry by Jack R Roberts)
  
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She watches from the kitchen window
As he stands out in the field
A teardrop running down her face
She knows the pain he feels

All their hopes and all their dreams
Lie just beneath the ground
They need some help from heaven
But a cloud cannot be found

They need a little rain

She walks out to stand beside him
Looks into his troubled eyes
Looking back at her, reflections of,
The clear blue cloudless sky

She says “Try not to worry,
Everything will be ok”
The dust falls from his open hand
And the wind blows it away

She’s praying for rain

That night as they were turning in
He said,“ How much more o Lord?”
She said “I know it’s hard to keep the faith
When the wolves are at the door”

She said “Everything will be alright
As long as we’re together”
“Come lay down here and let me
Take your mind off of the weather”

Praying for rain

He awoke to see the morning light
Shinning through her cotton gown
She was standing at the window
As the rain was pouring down

He got up and held her in his arms
As they watched the falling rain
The answer to her prayers
Now written on the window pane

The rains finally came


© Jack Roberts – October 19, 2003


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 Reviews of "Praying for Rain ~revised for contest ~"
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on November 2, 2003
Jack....this is an outstanding write...standing ovation for you my friend!!!!

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on November 1, 2003
I remember this one Jack - it is absolutely beautiful.
Nico

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Grewup on a farm learned to pray alot. Good write.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Prayer works for certain,I believe that,your poem is just fantastic Jack with heaps of positive thought.Great!
Best wishes
from kay

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
I agree Jack this poem would be a truly worthy winner!

Beautiful.....my best, Dani

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Jack this is a real winner you've got here my friend
I makes me feel that closeness and connection
with our Lord above!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Excellent write, Jack.. so glad you reposted.. beautiful storyline..
Jenni

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
<tears> I loved this, my friend.
EXCELLENT!! It speaks volumes.

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
I've said it before, and I'll say it again, Outstanding work! ~Z~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
So glad you reposted Jack, this is so wonderful,hard to find any better...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Brought tears to my eyes, one of your very best writes, Jack.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
What a wonderful story and to have it put to prose!!! You are very talented!!!
this is so touching
pax
A

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
truly beautiful Jack
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Jack I loved it the first time I read it and I adore it now...great write ...glad you reposted it..it is a winner...floria


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