The dim light of the candle
Cast soft shadows on the wall
As I watch you untie your hair
And watch it slowly fall
The soft glow on your body
Revealing every curve and line
Skin to skin so much in love
The night is yours and mine
The flicker of the candle light
Is reflected in your eyes
I start to say I love you
And then to my surprise
As you look down into my eyes
You take your fingertips
You smile softly down on me
And hold them to my lips
You say, “Mere words cannot describe
What lives between us two
I do know that you love me
And you know I love you too.
But what I want to hear tonight
Cannot be said with words
Sometimes the best things that are said
Are things that are not heard
~~~
Say you love me with your eyes
Let your body tell me so
Let your feelings be revealed
Let me look into your soul
Let the beating of our hearts
Tell us everything is right
Say you love me with your eyes
As we love into the night
~~~
As the morning light approaches
The candle burns down low
But even though, around you
There’s a certain kind of glow
I’ll wait till you awaken
About the time the sun will rise
When once again I’ll tell you
That I love you with my eyes
~~~
Say you love me with your eyes
Let your body tell me so
Let your feelings be revealed
Let me look into your soul
Let the beating of our hearts
Tell us everything is right
Say you love me with your eyes
As we love into the night
Such Romance and all so true So romantic and this is a great song too. Got music set to it? ~~ ya know, besides the music you two make with your hearts.
Love truly felt! Gorgeous!
Thank You Jack Beautiful!
Love Tracey xo
This is delightful, Jack, and reminds me of a poem I did along a similar theme, called "Tell Me". It's the unspoken that often moves us most deeply, leaves us so impacted and renders us so thoroughly naked and vulnerable. Love this motif, and your tender and poetic epxression. This could surely be a song. TY Kate xx
This is passion, enchantment, and tenderness......
Its lyrical.....its a ballad.......
this is love......beautiful beautiful write Jack.......wow you have resurrected and them some! ha ha fair dust does it! lol
I am saving this..............its beyond.......BEYOND........
ty for this.......for sharing your talent!!!!!!!!!!!!!
its so sentimental.........I bet Mama loved it! what did she say???????
your the best woody!
pax........Anita :)
I cannot image any woman reading this and not sighing!!!!!!!!!!
Jack, I am nearly speachless. Beauty, innocence, caring and love are all so sweetly laced into these verses. This might not only be the best poem I have ever read from you, it may also be the most honest, open, sincere and glorious romantic poem I have ever read, period. I am saving this one, it is wonderful!
Take care,
Sherry
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Love truly felt! Gorgeous!
Thank You Jack Beautiful!
Love Tracey xo
Well penned!
This was very romantic!
Sandie May Angel :o)
Its lyrical.....its a ballad.......
this is love......beautiful beautiful write Jack.......wow you have resurrected and them some! ha ha fair dust does it! lol
I am saving this..............its beyond.......BEYOND........
ty for this.......for sharing your talent!!!!!!!!!!!!!
its so sentimental.........I bet Mama loved it! what did she say???????
your the best woody!
pax........Anita :)
I cannot image any woman reading this and not sighing!!!!!!!!!!
Reindeer
Love Tinka
A poem to read over and over again.
Thank you for the wonderful write.
very romantic
and soft loving
Thanks for sharing
William ....Peace
Take care,
Sherry