Longings (poem) by Jack R Roberts on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on November 26, 2003

wow...wow......wish i wrote it!!

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

A love that had no chance - this one made me cry.
Excellent
Nico

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 7, 2003

A brilliant piece Jack
Excellent write

William

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 7, 2003

This was so beautiful and moving, I loved it,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 7, 2003

I have to totally agree with Eileen and just add
I think it is awesome.
Best wishes always
from
Kay

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Warm, touching write.

Nancy

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Jack, loved the poem...but it needs a follow up. Love is worth any sacrifice. Any Jack. Write a sequel to this. True love is undendng no barrier is too great.
Bill Murray

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

This is a awesome fairytale of a write, so extremely enchanting...enjoyed so much that off into my library it now goes!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Magical write .......enjoyed it thru and thru

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

A very beautiful and touching tale Jack. Your rhyme is excellent. Very well done.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Maybe they should meet in the middle! Beautiful write.

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

cant bear it, surely love wins through? please.
Found it hard to read the last few verses, so sad....

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Lovely poem but so sad. It makes me glad I left the land where it meets the sea to go away with my sailor!

Reviewed by Dee C.

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

This one blows me away!!!
The tenderness...the longing of lost love!!!
I could read this one over and over!!!
Dee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Wow!!!......very touching romantic write Jack!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Outstanding write jack....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

Enchanting and so enjoyable, Jack!!! Wow, what a tale, so sad...I was hanging on every word! :)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

outstanding poem!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

Mercy, this is demmed good.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

Jack, Jack, Jack!!!!

Damn it man your writing is FINE....You have rhyme under your thumb..it obeys you....*IMPRESSED* No really!

Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

This is a very touching romantic write. A gem!

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

Wow!!!!!!
This is awesome writing!!!!
I was caught in it from
begining to end...
Would be nice if you wrote
a second part allowing them
to get back together somehow:)

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

Hi Jack,
This is a tender and emotional poem full of longing and the past lives of many are reflected in your words. Thank you for this gift.
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

This is a glorious write Jack, truly a romantic poetic story beautifully expressed with wonderful depth of feeling and yearning of star crossed love.

Reviewed by Brittany Ren�e

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

Oooh Jack! I loooove this! I particularly fancy sailours and seaman and this romantic story just... wow... <sigh>...

Warm Love
*Brittany Renee*

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

Jack,
This is so beautiful and so longing.
Peg