I Watch You ~ Peggy's challenge ~ (poem) by Jack R Roberts on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on November 8, 2003

A risk worth taking Jack.........She sounds divine...

Beautiful, emotive poetry......the best kind.......ty, Dani

Reviewed on November 8, 2003

WOW! Nice answer to that challenge! You go, dude!

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

Jack, I absolutely, positively loved this - and your quick wit caught me completely off guard. That may be because it's 2:01 a.m., but I'm inclined to think otherwise. Hope all is well. Dawn

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

Ah, the way you dazzle one with words so eloquently bound with the breath of love.
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

I think that you have more than met the challenge.

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Loved it, especially the punch line.
You should get a job on flexitime

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on November 3, 2003

jack....wonderful poetry....excellent!!!

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Excellent challenge reply made me smile too.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Jack, Now this is what I call perfection! and I don't use that word lightly;-)

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

this made me smile...

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Wonderful response to the challenge Jack. Excellent rhyme and flow.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

A very good romantic write Jack!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

This was interesting!...

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

This was wonderful Jack, I loved this response to Peggy's Challenge!

Rein

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Lovely write, Jack; thanks for sharing! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

(((jack)))

o, this is lovely! well done! :)

call in sick--your wife won't mind LOL

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Great response to the challenge, Jack.
Fantastic!
Jill

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Romantic perfection!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Love your rhythm here, Jack.... once in a while ya just have to be sick, you know? smiles..... excellent write....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Very good romantic write, Jack. Enjoyed it.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

What a special write this is! How truly tender and touching. Challenge well done. Lisa

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Refreshing in its beauty of love in the morning :-) Great write!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

{{{{Jack}}}}
This is indeed all the qualities of love... signed, sealed and delivered so sweet! I can feel the true love and passion flowing from your beautiful poetic verses!
EXCELLANT!
~Nikki~