Dream Traveler (poem) by Jack R Roberts on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Expertly put together and beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing this offering. Regis

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Wow! That last stanza phewwww! touching......Wonderful my prefect poet friend........ty, Dani

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

This was beautiful, I loved it so much, outstanding,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

I agree that this poem could be read in different ways and has been penned really well. I bet if you ask you will find out it is you in her dreams :-)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

Oh how poignant and beautiful is this write and the heart it sprang from.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

awww, this is too beautiful, jack! thanks for sharing such a lovely write! and happy thanksgiving to you! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

Jack, this is about as sweet as one could ever write. Your true feelings are conveyed so clearly for one that has left you for another. I cried. Lisa

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

THIS is sadly beautiful. The poem is dimensional...one could take this several different ways if they would like. Your work is excellent here. Love the way it builds intensity the whole way through. Fine work!!!

Thank You,
Emilie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

Gee Jack you penned a very touching piece Here!!

I can relate to this one so very much!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

This is so very touching Jack...I love it...floria

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

Wonderful write Jack, love the concept!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

The thief of dreams
Is full of schemes
And tricks the trusting heart
Waiting for sweet slumber, then his mischief starts!!
Come dance with me!!
Or sail the seas!!
He whispers in the night
And when the dreamer wakens
This rougue is out of site!!

I think its true love....to see someones dream reactions, and speculate on them, and even if the speculations are not what the observer would hope for....just the fact that you say....I am here...says lots!!! Dreams are no threat.....and it takes a wise partner to realize that...Confidence, is a blanket for both parties...I love this Jack...its soooooo......ummmm...oh i know...
YOU!!!
Pax
Anita

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

Jack: This is so sweet. What do our spouses dream about in their sleep? My husband tells me he's not responsible for anything he says in his sleep. You might want to check out my poem, "He's A Sleep Talker" if you haven't already done so.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

I loved it. Wonderful write

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

Wonderful write!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

Dreams are made for dreamers who dreams realities;
and the philosophers are murdered by own curiosities.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)