This is so sad, Jack, but so beautifully written. Losing loved ones, of any kind, is always very difficult.
Well expressed and very heartfelt. I can tell you put some deep thoughts and emotions into this write.
Take care,
Jill :)
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
Oh, my, Jack.. such a universally familiar truth here.. have we all that voice from somewhere in the past? The one that wakes us suddenly and bingo! crystal clear and agonizing! sigh.. you've expressed it with great poiegnancy and honesty... truly lovely. katy xox.
What an absolutely beautiful poem, so well done, I love the rhyme, but even more, its the story it tells, and the emotion that these words weave........applause!!! A
:)Sandy
I agree, "A sad yet beautiful write...
Great job..
Trixie :)
~Chrissie
Take care okay!!
Love Tinka
Nancy
Well expressed and very heartfelt. I can tell you put some deep thoughts and emotions into this write.
Take care,
Jill :)