Slow Dancing (poem) by Jack R Roberts on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2004

Yes, this definitely should be put to music.

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Jack....very wonderful song!!!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

This is absolutely great!!!!! I would love to hear it put to melody........Very romantic!!! You did a fantastic job here, as you always do I must say! Its always a pleasure to see your posts!!! You are one of my favorites!!!!..........Pax.........A

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

Lovely rhytmically loving song, Jack. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

Good to see you Jack! One of the best rhyme and meter men;-) Love this one, that's my kind of dancing!;-)

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

Jack...my fellow rhymer...I love this...so glad to see you
posting..this is wonderful...floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

I would love to dance with you......may I?

Perfet song Jack!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

May I have the next dance.... <smiles>

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

Hi Jack:

Funny I had a dream last night, I was dancing with someone whom I thought I know. He asked me if I'm having the same birthdate as his - May 15, and I replied yes. Then he said we should dance. We danced as this person held me close to him.

After the cand we had a feast, many people came to eat. There were so much food to eat, and I could taste them...

Oh, I'm sorry, I got carried away when I should have been commenting on your poem here:

What a nice poem here and so beautifully-written. I like slow-dancing too.

A good romantic and thought-provoking piece.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

A man that understands the beauty of being slow......GREAT write!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

What a lovely song, beautiful to read this morning!

Reindeer

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

Jack I love your song! Yeah man, "slow dancing all night long." What a pleasant thought put into words in song. When your heart is touched by love - writing a song is easier than many think. Good job friend. Bill

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 21, 2004

There is nothing anymore romantic than dancing in the arms of the one you love. Your poem Jack has captured that special moment. Good write. Lisa