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Feeling Time a Pinwheel
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"We held hands as we jumped into the sea"


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Feeling Time a Pinwheel

Somehow I knew she was waiting for me
There was a question mark in blue and black
Tattooed in exclamation on her back
Like me she wondered when we might be free
We both knew we had no answers at all
Just questions as we headed into fall
Those unanswered questions life is made of

Headfirst head over heels in love with love
And ready for that deep-end dive at last
Which had been waiting for her and for me
With presently no future and no past
No time like the present for us to be
And feeling time a pinwheel spinning fast
We held hands as we jumped into the sea

+Steven Curtis Lance



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Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on October 16, 2006
Jump in with both feet!

Chrissy

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
And the sea is so full of mystery and uncertainty... ...that's why it is so captivating; like love. Thank you for sharing this offering, my friend. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on October 12, 2006
I agree with Marguerite. I would add this. Marguerite is right, if you wait too long, it passes you by but on the other hand, if you don't wait long enough for it to mature it will not last. Sounds like a catch 22.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine
Reviewed on October 12, 2006
It sounds like you're talking about matrimony. That's the only way. Ifyou think too long, it passes you by Marguerite

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
Great analogy of new love, scary, exciting, uncertainty, and all those other fleeting feelings of first love.

Fee

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
Steve this a
beautiful piece you have composed
excellent write
Peace be with you

William


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