Great title - wish I had thought of it. The metre and rhyme needs a little work and I feel you can do better with this. I quit smoking two years ago and I reckon I would have appreciated this sentiment at the time. You really have got something with this poem. I think you should keep the earthy 'plain speaking' but, and this is just my opinion of course, your poem needs to flow a little easier. I don't know if it was intentional that the poem is 14 lines. It could be a sonnet?
Sylvia Masters, a hot fifty-two year old widow and CEO of her husbands company is challenged by her own instincts, family and friends when the Lieutenant investigating the murder of her ex-fiancee ask her to dinner. After a tumultuous beginning, the
I wrote this novel several years ago, I self published and never had it to sell. I have decided to rewrite it and hope to get it published within a few months for people to be able to buy. I had a few copies and gave them to a few family members and
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Lew
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.