Alone (poem) by Dee C. on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 13, 2004

Dark...the depths of loneliness captured like this soul in the picture....an amazing poem alongside this pic. I liked this very much.

Reviewed by Linda Roman

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

deep, I like

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Dark and so sad, much too real. Well penned and heart felt, Dee.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

This is really deep can't get much darker than the soul being dead.Yikes!Superb poem!

Reviewed by Gary Gebert

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

An incredible description. Along with the pic it is a haunting vision. The feeling of being alone is hard to live with. No matter if real or imagined. Very nice work.

Gary

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Deep dark and well written!

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Powerful, intense write...
stark reality
This is superb
One I wish I had written
EXCELLENT

*Linda*

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Hard hitting and chilling poem....I felt this intensely.
Great writing
Andrea

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Incredible capture of what it means to feel alone.
Chilling.
John

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

This is so sad and heartwrenching, Dee!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

This is indeed a sorry demise of a human being, spelled out
in powerful verse.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

This is very sad and so very touchy Debby!!

"Her beating heart the only life left
All she has to own is flesh and bone
Even her soul was put to death"

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Helga Ross

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

I've seen such scene, sad to say.
You've captured it so well.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

{{{DEE}}}

Missed you
this is so lonely
such despair can
be flet in this
piece of gentle loss....

Excellent emotions expressed...

Lady Peg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

sad and heartwrenching write; very well done, dee!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(