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Hello are you out there?

by Elisabeth Barstowe — Read all 441 poems by Elisabeth Barstowe

This is a simple love poem, a spin on your standard we're all looking at the same moon cheesy kind of love poem that makes culture snobs all over the world gag when they hear it. Simply written to make the person I care about the most happy. Enjoy.

Friday, May 15, 2009

Hello are you out there?
I was just thinking
That I would like to have you here
And now that we're on the subject
There is so much more I want you to hear
I guess to start with
I find this whole situation
Just a little bit scary
I was shot down so many times before
A shell schocked victim of war

Hello are you out there?
I was just thinking
I would like to have you here
I think I see something in you
That stands apart from all the rest
I see a shining soul
With a heart that has room
enough for a crowd
I hope I'm right

Hello are you out there?
I was just thinking
I would like to have you here
In you I see
A beautiful mind
And I don't think your words are lying
I see you in me and me in you
I see the light...

 



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Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 19, 2010
Yes he is out there and you got to make him look back and wonder if you are out there. I love, love poems. I guess I am a mushy kind of person.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Margo Lumley
Reviewed on December 17, 2009
Nicely written. Beautiful sentiment. Margo

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 17, 2009
It's a good thing when
what makes the other stand
apart in your eyes is reciprocated
Sweet sentiment Elisabeth.
r

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring
Reviewed on November 30, 2009
Hello? I must have missed this one. glad I caught up with it.
Very fine poem indeed. Groundbreaking stuff.
Good work.
Steve.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 10, 2009
I like this Elisabeth. Very sweet and unpretentious. Patrick

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 28, 2009
Yeah, we're out here. It is scary starting out here or anywhere for that matter. It starts out slow so keep persisting. The more you review the more reviews you will get. And you get to know people like me (lol) who is half Swedish and half German and here in the old USA. All in all the people here are nice and you become a member of the family. And we get to enjoy your poetry like I have enjoyed this poem. Liz

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
I think the intended recipient of these sentiment is very fortunate, Elisabeth. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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