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The Black and Blues

by Elisabeth Barstowe — Read all 441 poems by Elisabeth Barstowe

Friday, January 15, 2010

The Black and Blues
have come to haunt me
In the dead of night
they scream their terror
with all their might
Do you hurt on the inside like I do?
Do you fear what is hidden beneath like I do?
I wonder do you feel it too?

You were so pretty
so innocent and bright
your eyes so honest and true (blue?)
How could I have known
what was the real you?
Do you hurt on the inside like I do?
Do you fear what is hidden beneath like I do?
I wonder do you feel it too?

You took my mind
and turned it into scrambles
You took my heart
and shattered it whole
You planted the seed of doubt
in my soul

It's like a splinter that won't go away
It's like those Black and Blues
that are there to stay
Do you hurt on the inside like I do?
Do you fear what's hidden beneath like I do?
I wonder do you feel it too?
(shame, shame, shame on you)
Shame....

 

 



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Reviewed on February 8, 2010
well expressed, so good I could feel the pain behind the verse, cheers

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 7, 2010
Elisabeth, you have written about pain in such a powerful way...well done.

Reviewed by Gerald Tate
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
What a bloody great poem. Keep em' rollin!

Best, Gerry

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on January 15, 2010
Your powerful penn of private pain, yet it could be the story for many of us.
Amazing how poetry can be a healing balm.
Top notch!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 15, 2010
Powerful in emontions and meaning expressed; I can relate to this, Elisabeth. Some people don't know how to love. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis


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