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Elisabeth Barstowe

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I don't know if this poem even makes any sense the way it's written. It doesn't flow easy, it's just words to heal one world before it looses faith.

Monday, February 15, 2010

The humanity
suffers from serious inhumanity
Some are more
equipped of this than others
Now who's idea was it really
to do those deeds?

I think some people see
more or less potential
To cause mayhem
and disorder

Some people
knows all to well
What strings to pull
and what sore spots to rub
I guess at least
I have to admire
The pure genious
of this

But...
I don't have to like it
and I can tell you one
thing for sure
No matter how hard you try
What was
will never be no more

If I have my way
the world will
one day know for sure
That peace and love
will rule forever more



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Reviewed by Michelle Schaeffer
Reviewed on February 15, 2010
I disagree with one thing, - this inhuman side of humanity in not genious! What you described are the insecure, self absorbed, fickel assholes that can't take two seconds to look past their own nose and see that every damn day has been a GIFT! Their not happy, their not satisfied with who they see in the mirror. So it is this: Let me make someone or a whole lot of someones feel like crap so I can't feel good about me! Its not money that causes corruption, It's people that corrupt money! Money and recognition is shallow in the hands of these so called geniouses. There are so many more of "us" then "them" trust me! It's just the media would'nt make a dime off of stories filled with the good, pure and lovely. "Laugh;)"
Next time somebody gives you the finger? flash them the biggest smile you got!!

Great write by the way* I liked it.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 15, 2010
Elisabeth, regrettably my friend,it is all about money an power -- sad that most of the world's population must suffer so that a few achieve what they want -- great joy and peace be with you -- JM

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on February 15, 2010
I am not an expert, so I will leave the suggestions and critiques for the poets here that have helped and inspired me.
...but for me
Your words do flow, and your heart makes itself perfectly clear.

Wonderful messages. Always Be Well, Carin'


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