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Shades of grey

by Elisabeth Barstowe — Read all 441 poems by Elisabeth Barstowe

Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Hello. My name is Pete.
I'm an original american hero
I was injured on my first tour
now I can't seem to come back.
I need wheels underneath
to stay on track.
Expensive meds
to fight demons in the night
not to mention the pain.

In my neighbourhood
I'm simply known as
Pete, the original.
I need welfare checks
to pay rent
and to heal my spirit.
No, I don't spend it on spirits
it's the truth and that's
all I can say
but would you believe me anyway?

Hello. My name is Sheena.
I'm the girl next door.
I spent years in college
to get a degree.
My parents couldn't pay to get me through
and the student loans piled up
now as a fresh baked Dr. in philosophy
I've discovered that nothing is free.
Now all I can do to get by
is to cash my welfare check with a sigh.
I've become what I tried not to be
but if I told you
would you believe me?

Hello. My name is Hank.
I used to live the american dream.
I had a nice car, a nice house,
a pretty wife and pretty kids
and a good chunk of change in the bank.
100% selfmade
I built my company from scratch,
I took my son to the park on sundays
to play catch.
One lousy bite from one lousy bug
was all it took to tear down the castle,
wish I'd discovered in time
it wouldn't have been such a hassle.
Now, medical problems are chronic
not to mention costly.

My house, my car, my wife, my kids
are all gone,
my nice chunk of change on the bank
vanished without a trace and my
company was lost.
Now all I can do to get by
is to cash my welfare check with a sigh.
I've become what I worked so hard
not to be,
but if I told you would you even believe me?

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on March 1, 2010
I believe all these stories, sad but true, and happening to many of us in these bad economy days. It seems we go 10 steps backward and not much forward. But being positive about losses and all can help us move forward if we analyze things to the utmost.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on February 24, 2010
Powerful and profound. Stark reality. Love it and its candor. Liz

Reviewed by Cela Shearer
Reviewed on February 24, 2010
I truly appreciated the truth of this piece. Yes, it does happen, and you expressed it so well.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
You don't hold back, Elisabeth, nor should you - this is strong and real and hits the target.

John

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
Elisabeth, almost nothing in reality is black or white -- gray is the predominate color of situational events and evaluations -- an interesting piece, the analogies so true to life -- peace and love be with you my friend -- JM

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
The American nightmare. And brilliantly told.

Boeing Military offered me a job over there. It looked and sounded great. Until I got to know peeps who are so in-debt due to Hospital costs. And if you are seriously ill it's a long drop. Without a safety net. And those who are sick, even soldiers. Are not treated with dignity. So I stayed over there but under the Great British Flag. Where no-one pays for treatment. And if like me, the wife runs off with the house. The country gives me a new and delightful home. And a fresh start. Very poignant poem. In my view from over the pond it seems there are only winners and losers. If you're a loser than you're an embarrassment and left alone.


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