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Unveiling Seth

by Elisabeth Barstowe — Read all 441 poems by Elisabeth Barstowe

Monday, May 3, 2010

He was standing in the middle
of a poppyfield,
surrounded by glorious colours.
To his left was a dirt road; it's curves
reaching as far as the eye could see.
To his right was a railroad track
dissappearing into the horizon.

He looked around pondering
wich way to go.
His eyes pleased with
the abundance of colours
so beautiful and peaceful.

Behind him approached
with roaring thunder,
a mighty freight train.
He was startled by this,
jolted out of his peaceful reflection.

In front of him approached
a rusty old car,
stained with timeless scars.
Peacefully moving along,
this old, beat up truck.
It made him smile
it looked so out of place
and silly.

Suddenly the poppys
around him withered,
turned to black and died.
He was upset by this
and wished he could somehow
make it stop.
He wanted all that beauty
preserved, to enjoy.

All around him
spreading faster and faster
the flowers died
and all of a sudden
he realised.
He was the point of origin,
he caused the death of beauty.
He felt a terrible jolt of shame
for an instant;
and then..
Nothing.

A wild laughter started
growing
from the core of his soul.
He laughed and laughed
and laughed.
He felt strong,
powerful and
invincible.

.....And not a all ashamed....

 



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Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on May 8, 2010
Beautiful interpretation of the vision...your writings always captivating, for one sense or another. I love how you mix the darker writes with the light and soothing.

Your paintings must be beautiful!

Thank you, for always giving me the picture with your words, it is as though you are sharing your paintings.

Be Always Well, Carin' Spirit

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 7, 2010
excellent sense of creative recall ...

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on May 5, 2010
What a fantastic feeling of power you describe--to be the point of origin. Creators are we all. Life is what you make of it. --Charlie

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on May 5, 2010
Super poem, Elisabeth

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 4, 2010
Elisabeth,
This dream has a strange and yet familiar 'ring' to it, the poppies particularly significant and symbolic... I tried some time ago in a poem called Red and Black to capture a parallel experience, there's something about poppies and their blood redness, isn't there? You add another intriguing dimension with the train and truck.

John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 3, 2010
That is some dream (perhaps a nightmare) depending on the interpretation. Thank you for sharing this dream experience, Elisabeth. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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