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Elisabeth Barstowe

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Work of Art

by Elisabeth Barstowe — Read all 441 poems by Elisabeth Barstowe

I added a few lines to this.

Tuesday, July 13, 2010

Such a thirst for recognition
paired with a gentle heart.
I don't quite get the contradiction,
but baby you're a work of art.

You are so unique
in every single way.
Powerful and meek
in a selfless way.

Your hunger for approval
has me somewhat confused.
It makes for assertiveness' removal
and leave you wide open for being used

Such a thirst for recognition
paired with a gentle heart.
I don't quite get the contradiction
but baby you're a work of art..

Someday I hope you get what you yearn for
your  merit badge and gold star.
One day I hope you're truly satisfied, not longing anymore,
I will be here waiting, watching your triumph from afar.

You're soul is beautiful, yet ugly when repressed
your writing is sometimes illegible
though when voiced  your thougts are beautifully expressed.
You're inexplicably eligible and intricately tolerable.

Such a thirst for recognition
paired with a gentle heart.
I don't quite get the contradiction
but baby you're a work of art.


 

 

 



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Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 19, 2010
I can hear this one being sung Elizabeth. I love writing Country. Great piece.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 16, 2010
Elisabeth, chameleon characteristics abound here my friend. Very difficult for him to find the mood? An interesting assessment. May peace and love be always with you my friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on July 13, 2010
I really liked this one Elisabeth, got me pondering weather it is about a partner or an offspring.
Warm regards,
David

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on July 13, 2010
An interestingly written piece...there are those who even with all the recognition and glory of fame still haven't found there place within society or even within a relationship...

nice work...

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on July 13, 2010
Wonderful flowing words ~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 13, 2010
Yes, these are lyrics, Elisabeth, and great ones, with flow and impact.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 13, 2010
This is the great beginning for a song, would make great lyrics...
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