You have a way with social commentary that is not the ordinary stolid statement of moral imperative. Refreshing is the word.

Nicely and effectively conveyed.

Axilea

Elisabeth, this rings so true to me. It is prevalent in the last few generations of American and other societies. Social courtesy and respect for others has taken a long vacation. "Me" and "I" are the operative words that reveal what lies just below the surface. Compassion too is almost out of vogue. The traditional family unit has all but disappeared. Single parent families are inadequate at providing the advice, love and attention children demand as well as timely discipline. Neighborhoods to have lost their paternal attitudes and guardianship for the children. It is certainly, "Bitter Fruit". May you have joy peace and love always with you my friend. Jon Michael

What a generous spirit and poem of hope ~
Blessings,
Christine

Childhood is such a difficult time and not many give anytime, direction or love.

May your future not only live, let it thrive.

Cheers,
Dan

The ending of your poem offers healing and resolution and therefore hope; at least that's the way I understand it. Thank you, Elisabeth. Love and best wishes,

Regis