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Elisabeth Barstowe

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Fetus

by Elisabeth Barstowe — Read all 441 poems by Elisabeth Barstowe

Monday, October 18, 2010

Floating in a sea of plenty
far beyond the troubles of this world,
natural habitat so rich and abundant.

I give up decadence
to keep you safe from harm.

Nothing beyond pure and simple
existence
in smooth and silky
fluid environment.
Motion in motion
a sea of floating tranquil devotion.

Day turns into night
and night turns into day
in speechless beautific sway.
 

 



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Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 22, 2010
Elisabeth, you have spun a fine rendering. You embraced the wheel of imagination and this marvelous" Sprout" of color was intertwined with magic. It is the quintessential essence of the power of positive thinking. Upbeat in a tumultuous time. Well done my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
A happy poem living for the present. Laurel

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 19, 2010
Yes, Elisabeth, this is, as Christine says, powerful and lyrical; I love the elegant phrasing and your word choices.

John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 18, 2010
Such a powerful flow runs through this beauty...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2010
Taking the ills and tribulations upon yourself is this poems worth, and a good worth it is at that.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 18, 2010
Lovely words and thoughts wrapped up in this work Elizabeth, well done.
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Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 18, 2010
Powerfully lyrical poetry!
Best Wishes,
Christine


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