Sounds of time
hidden agony.
I fear no reaper
for I have travelled
brimstone covered roads.
The most coveted was the black rose,
the various layers of copper rust.
Peeled off one by one,
to uncover a core untouched.
Stormy weather,
puffed up feathers.
Yes, the harsh winds,
bore her name.
She put my mind at ease,
yes she did.
For my life was
a dark one,
the son of a socio-
my path was unclear.
When I met her
Stormy weather,
through it
my path was clear.
Axilea
the various layers of copper rust.
Peeled off one by one,
to uncover a core untouched".
This was written very well. The darkness mingled with light and the words of this poem are alive..excellent
Allen
word choices, images, word play, phrasing, line lengths.
Everything.
John
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