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Taken

by Elisabeth Barstowe — Read all 441 poems by Elisabeth Barstowe

Tuesday, January 22, 2013

I think perhaps my mind's a little taken
perhaps I was mistaken
See I don't know what I just said
cause you're replies are messing with my head
They have nothing to do with the subject
but I guess that's a matter of object

I try to explain a little more
I guess your ego's weaving lore
I still don't get that you get
at least not yet

I'm waiting



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Reviewed by Dark Knight
Reviewed on February 27, 2013
nice poem--but in defense of guys everywhere we never get the subtle hints women toss in our directions-sadly you have to tell us

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 23, 2013
Reads like a private message. Maybe I shouldn't butt in… So I'll butt out.

Ron

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 22, 2013
I'm with Budd, I hope your wait is short.
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 22, 2013
i hope you don't have to wait very long
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 22, 2013
I have been there, done that, in face within the last hour . . . Frustrating, very much frustrating . . .


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