AuthorsDen.com  Join | Login 

 
Where Authors and Readers come together!

Authors | Books | Audiobooks | eBooks | Signed Bookstore | Stories | Articles | Poetry | Blogs | News | Events | Reviews | Videos | Success | Gold Members | Testimonials

Featured Authors:  Gracie McKeever, iJay Dubya, iMaryAngela Nangini PhD, iDavid Young, iPatricia Hilliard, iJoshua Su, iR.E.E.S Blogs Linda Smith, Publisher, iMiller Caldwell, iPawan Mishra, iLisa Loucks Christenson, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Elisabeth Barstowe

 Follow Me  

· 442 titles
· 1,377 Reviews
· Share with Friends!
· Save to My Library
·
Member Since: Mar, 2009

   Sitemap
   My Blog
   Contact Author
   Read Reviews




Short Stories
· The Horror


Poetry
· Nightsky

· I Dare Not Think

· The Stars

· Slaying The Past

· Heavenly Bodies

· Crystal Ball

· The Flame

· Don’t Stop Believing

· The Stalker

· Promises

         More poetry...

Elisabeth Barstowe, click here to update your web pages on AuthorsDen.

   
  Share   Print   Save   

Diamonds and Dust

by Elisabeth Barstowe — Read all 441 poems by Elisabeth Barstowe

Saturday, March 16, 2013

Diamonds and dust
gold and rust
One outweighs
the other

Hand in hand
off to foreign land
one and another
half with eachother

Beggar and giver
company man and life-liver
Taking and giving
loving and living
 



Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 7, 2014

thought provoking read

Reviewed by Dark Knight
Reviewed on March 20, 2013
creatively done

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on March 18, 2013
We explore the elements of these comparisons in every decision we make, friend or foe, husband or wife, or not. You last two lines are the important sum and substance we should apply to all, "taking and giving, loving and living". So simplistic and yet so provocatively complex. I wish you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 16, 2013
joined in life exploring life loving life
budd

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 16, 2013
“Jack Spratt could eat no fat, his wife could eat no lean.” Opposites attract, and if they don't explode, may have a long time together.



Very creative and thought provoking.



Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 16, 2013
And such is life it seems..., ...thank you for sharing, Elisabeth. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 16, 2013
Interesting comparisons like wheat and chaff,
good writers and dabblers.
Glad you fit the first category.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 16, 2013
Taking the opposites as you list things you want to remember for your own pleasure, or maybe displeasure. The bucket list has been balanced out.


New Poetry by Elisabeth Barstowe
hhh