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Fading Star (chaotic symbiotic)

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Wednesday, January 1, 2014

I am the future untold

I am the light unseen

I am the glory, the pain, the story unfold

I walk beside you, mark your path and guide you

As you falter, I clear

As you stumble, I stear

I wont let you fade away

See me as the rising sun

I am the guiding star

I am the call from far

I am the linger of the setting sun

As you falter, I clear

As you stumble, I stear

I wont let you fade away

My fading star, my call from far

Your past manipulate your future

You're trapped in chaotic symbiotic

You're an open wound, no suture

As you falter, I clear

As you stumble, I stear

I wont let you fade away

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 30, 2014

The song of you, Elisabeth. Lovely and meaningful. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe

Reviewed on January 3, 2014

Just to make this clear. I know it's good poetrywise, I just don't know wether it would hold up as lyrics, cause I've been told it's not as easy as writing poetry. It has to have a certain rythm, of wich I know nothing about. Anyhow, I was asked if I wanted to contribute with lyrics to an album, so I thought I'd try it on for size and get some advice.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 3, 2014

I'm sure that someone can put it to music. It certainly has the right stuff. All it needs is a superstar delivery.

Ron

Reviewed by Tao Chi

Reviewed on January 2, 2014

This would make a great song. Love the meaning. Awesome lyrics.

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on January 1, 2014

You are what you say that you are.
So tell the world that you are a writer and a poet.
As this poem is much better than you might think.
Well done Elisabeth!

May peace, love and blessings follow you throughout the New Year!

John Michael Domino

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on January 1, 2014

Keep to your wants and needs
budd

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