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Elisabeth Barstowe

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Hold my Breath

by Elisabeth Barstowe — Read all 441 poems by Elisabeth Barstowe

Inspired by P S latest Poem

Saturday, April 15, 2023


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The dream not ready to go
the mind not ready to show
threads of harmony in the now

Every breath take you further away 
hold my breath to make you stay
With this steady rhyme we sway 

Don't take my words and leave me speachless 
I have a weakness for you my love, I confess 
without you my world would surely regress 

This scorching heat, this burning flame 
the intense desire I need for it to remain 
my world without it a hollow refrain 

Gone astray in disarray 
push me further away 
into you I stray 
now
take me away 

Into the sweet burning fire
of our desire

Where body and soul meet

 

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on April 15, 2023
Such passion in a poem, intense and deeply felt.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on April 15, 2023
Gentle thoughts await anyone reading these words and learning how persuasive one's steady breathing is in realizing life. Without it, one is gone.

Reviewed on April 15, 2023
A lovely sensual poem of romance, Elisabeth.


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