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On the brink of paradise

by Elisabeth Barstowe — Read all 441 poems by Elisabeth Barstowe

Friday, July 7, 2023


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When I speak of love
bring forth message 
on wings of a dove
(I hope)
Seems lovelorn
Or like lover scorned

But here I am in
our soft cocoon
Inside we swoon
You and me
all we see
a love meant
to be (we)

In sweet bliss
no one diss
we are as one
sweet love song
(you and me)

Marital bliss
comes down
exactly to this
Needn't think
on the brink
of paradise



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 8, 2023
I love that line, "no one diss." An everlasting love song.

You make a lovely couple. I haven't seen a man wearing a hat since the 1950s.

Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 7, 2023
Very nicely stated.
Fee


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