I think your poem illustrates the time we lack to spare for each other in our relationships. I can relate a lot to your poem. I think time has to be made on our parts and we have to keep the magic of looking in each others eyes to freeze time to keep love growing magnificent in all its emotions. Very Wonderful Work!
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
Edwin
Regis