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Sick Child Blues
by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary → (All Poetry by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary)
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This is a palindrome. The longest one I ever attempted.

Sick Child Blues

Missing you
through the long night,
my hand caressing
our fevered child.
My heart spasms
with each wrenching cough.
My spirit sighs
through frequent nose-bleeds.
Impotence immerses me
in a fog of futility.
All I can do --
I watch and pray,
holding her hand
through the long night,
missing you.

Missing you
through the long night,
holding her hand.
I watch and pray --
all I can do.
In a fog of futility,
impotence immerses me.
Through frequent nose-bleeds,
my spirit sighs --
with each wrenching cough,
my heart spasms.
Our fevered child,
my hand caressing
through the long night --
missing you.

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 Reviews of "Sick Child Blues"
Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Oh the strength you two must have, Dalla, as God only gives these angels to those who possess great inner reserves. Incredible write. Thank you for sharing this gift of frailty, humanity and hope. She lives! What a blessing...

Lin

Reviewed by Bennett Kremen
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
I was truly moved by this. I know of no more poignant experience that the sickness of ones child. Wishing you the very best of luck.

Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Words fail - except, I'm sorry. But just read your note to Karen, and hope blooms - what a gracious God we serve. Congratulations to your little dynamo, give her a (((HUG))) from me!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Karen, this was written in 1999, when we almost lost one of our twins. She had Leukemia three times, and two bone marrow transplants. We almost lost her in 1999. She is now 9 years out of transplant, and will be starting as a Junior in College in the fall. She's no longer identical with her sister, since The Total Body Irradiation, but after three years of daily growth hormone injections, she's up to five feet tall, and a little dynamo. She's a tribute to tenactity!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Dallas, this is so beautifully written.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2009
I go through this too from time to time Dallas. Beautiful writing here. All the best to you!

Reviewed on June 21, 2009
A sad one you've penned, Dallas; hopefully your child will be better soon! You and your child are both in my prayers and thoughts today! Well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 21, 2009
She will recover and love will return.

Ron

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on June 21, 2009
MAY GOD WILL BRING HAPPINESS IN YOUR HEART!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva


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