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Early Paradise
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Early Paradise

Peace magnified in
early dawn, as I creep
down the path to the
glassy surface, clasped
in chill, misty fingers.
No sound, but the sleepy chitter of
tiny birds, and the soft
whoosh, whoosh of my fly line.
Barely a ripple from
twisted temptation, then
the wait begins.
Whoever twitches first
loses the game.
Breakfast this morning
will be tasty!

Dallas D'Angelo-Gary 08


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 Reviews of "Early Paradise"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 14, 2009
Love this, Dallas, especially your last two lines!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 13, 2009
The magnified peace juxtaposed against the game is extremely fulfilling. Wonderful poetry.

Reviewed on August 13, 2009
Great write, Dallas; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2009
I'll take the perch. Bring it on!


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